| "Thy Heart is Thy Mind" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Jarcarga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! They're so cute together. *Sighs* The perfect mixture of drama and romance...oh it's so prettiful! *Giggles insanely* I LOVE TAKOUJI! I don't know why but this story has me giggling even more then Deaf And Mute, but it does. Too bad this story is over. I was hoping to leave more pointless reviews. Wait! There's a third installment! What was it called? The Fading Touch! Or something. Well anyway, wonderful story! It's so cute! I love the way Takuya says 'I Love You.' Oh, so adorable! Hehe. -Jarcarga
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Title: To continue or not to continue? That is that question
Reviewed By: Suki Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2003 18:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think you should continue the story. |
Reviewed By: ruddykitty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 07:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
You -really- need to work on your grammar and such. o.O;;; but this fic has definetly caught my attention. You are doing very good on it and I really can't wait to see more :D |
Reviewed By: PDUTogepi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 17:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOWIE! This story is so cool and so sweet ^_^ Eeee! Keep up the excellent work on it! |
Reviewed By: Darcy335 On: April 04, 2003 15:50 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW HE USED AN ARMY KNIFE?!?! *faints* BAYLEEEEE!!!!!! NO KNIVES IN THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!
But a sword..... Well that would be different!!!!!!! ^-^ But noooooo... u had to use an ARMY KNIFE!!!!!! ¿-¿ -_-' Sorry... HEY WHEN ARE U GONNA DO MORE ON CINDERJURI???????!!!!!!!! HUH?! HUH?! HUH?! HUH?! HUH?! |
Reviewed By: Darcy335 On: April 04, 2003 15:48 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW HE USED AN ARMY KNIFE?!?! *faints* BAYLEEEEE!!!!!! NO KNIVES IN THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!
But a sword..... Well that would be different!!!!!!! ^-^ But noooooo... u had to use an ARMY KNIFE!!!!!! ¿-¿ -_-' Sorry... HEY WHEN ARE U GONNA DO MORE ON CINDERJURI???????!!!!!!!! HUH?! HUH?! HUH?! HUH?! HUH?! |
