| "How to mend a broken Carrot" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE
Reviewed By: coldsiren On: February 12, 2004 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sugoi..sugoi.. ive just read your story.. i read all the chapters for just one day coz i can't get enough and i cant stop.. ow pleeeaaaase updaaaaaate? please.. please .. you're readers and rewievers like ME! ^^ will just wait for you.. Arigatou!!
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Title: Moo?
Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: February 01, 2004 01:05 CST
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So, ummm, is this fic discontinued? If so, I may just cry. It's so good!! I hope the evil harpies of writer's block, or whatever it is, leaves you!! Go go evil-ness!! So, I guess this is both a plea and a piece of proof. Proof in that the fic is still being enjoyed and all. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: Strega On: December 16, 2003 18:23 CST
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UPDATE NOW! Oh, I mean....please update....:) Pretty please, with sugar and money on top!
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Reviewed By: ^.^ On: October 24, 2003 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please do continue.
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Title: Mend Broken Carrot
Reviewed By: ME again! On: September 29, 2003 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleeease Update!
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Title: How to mend a broken carrot
Reviewed By: ME On: September 15, 2003 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY Good writing. GREAT with editing. Has problems with plurals, past and present tense, a few spelling errors (ex. threw instead of through), and words like 'a' and 'the' where they don't belong. Also lack of ? marks.
Otherwise loved the fic.
p.s. Marron doesn't have to use magic or his sword on Rhubarb. There are sooo many more appropriate things to employ. I was thinking a spoon specially dulled and applied to a certain area -(vicious smile)- before hanging his guts on a nearby tree as a warning to other would-be child molestors!!!!!
Please write more soon. I hope Marron lets their father know just how DISAPPOINTED he is in him! |
Reviewed By: @_@ On: July 21, 2003 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so awesome...continue! |
Reviewed By: Sara On: June 25, 2003 07:55 CDT
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I love this story and am looking forward to the next instalment. Please don't forget it you've been doing so well and I really want to know what happens next. |
Reviewed By: mistress On: June 12, 2003 01:25 CDT
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whoo-hoo! more! awesome story, good angst, lovely lemons, puuuuurrrrfffeeeect! |
Reviewed By: More On: June 05, 2003 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More please ^_^ Anxiously awaiting to see how it turns out. |
Reviewed By: Yxonomei On: April 21, 2003 20:55 CDT
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Sweet. |
Reviewed By: Yxonomei [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2003 20:18 CDT
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w00t! |
Reviewed By: Redgar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2003 11:54 CDT
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it's good i am straight and i like it. Well i am hooked keep it coming ok |
Reviewed By: Torres On: April 17, 2003 18:13 CDT
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Oh, this was great! I am SO happy you're getting the chapters out so fast, 'cause I'm checking everyday! This chapter was so sweet...so plausible...and so sexy! PLEASE, keep it coming! Heh, no pun intended. |
Reviewed By: Evil Cackling Hippy Overlord On: April 12, 2003 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ Sweet Marron/Carrot fluff in this story. Though this E.C.H.O. is usually a Millie/Carrot or Marron/Millie fan, I am finding myself enjoying the story. Even with the intense Carrot torture/angst(just wanted to go out and kill some sorcerers and Gataeu grr..). |
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