Reviewed By: Kiri On: June 27, 2003 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very warm story. I love the interaction between Marron and Carrot - "snuggle bunny" *snicker*. And that scene in the last chapter was very very nice. ;)
Gateau's behavior seemed a bit erratic, as did Carrot's, and passing it by a beta wouldn't be a bad idea, but overall those things didn't take away from the general enjoyment.
Good work! |
