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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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that was effin amazing...i hope you write more with those pairings. you're a great hentai writer.
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Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 16:23 CDT
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Wow. I almost feel sorry for the professor. Almost. Incest aside, great work.
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Title: Excellent update
Reviewed By: AXMODEFRED [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So hot it fogged up my screen. I look forward to more of this or any of your other awesome stories.
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Title: i hope ur happy
Reviewed By: Zan-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
am i happy...or disturbed? thank you..u have proven that there is a line that says u can be happy and disturbed at the same times happy=somewhat disturbed=somewhat same but a little more than happy i hope your happy...u just killed the rest of my so called innocence with this story..."shivers" "goes hide in corner" "goes in fetal position.." "crys" "weep" "weep" i am scared... im gona waste all my numbers....dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot vdot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot dot
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Title: MORE!!!!
Reviewed By: Kyo_Honda [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love henti and i dont think that ive read such a good sex story i would love to read more
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Title: ....
Reviewed By: KageChidori [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 21:57 CST
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why does it have to end!?!??? 16 out of 10 on everything!!!
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Title: dude
Reviewed By: i for got my name On: August 13, 2005 07:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude it was realy good but i think it would be better is misty joined on ooooo misty *drools*
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Title: >_>
Reviewed By: SirOverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 12:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My my that was an interesting story. im afraid i have to say its in my favorites. Great Job!!!
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Reviewed By: OMG On: April 09, 2005 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I loved it! Please continue!
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Title: it made me so fuckin hott
Reviewed By: butterball On: March 03, 2005 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG u have no idea how HOTT this story made me feel...I was rubbin my pussy and humping the chair like crazy....incest is bad i know but once in awhile its awesome to get some pleasure out of a taboo subject....damn...write more PLEASE....Like...Ash with his cousin or sumthin forbidden
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Reviewed By: k_sumi On: January 22, 2005 11:57 CST
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Are you crazy????? O_O Do you do it whit your mather????? Really, man, are you crazy. You need a doctor!!!!
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Title: umm...
Reviewed By: Shadow's Light On: January 18, 2005 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would be a ten but i find the topic odd... though strangly arousing. Just Kidding. Good writing though.
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Reviewed By: StormTheHedgechidna [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 16:12 CST
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"..........WTF?!....u are 1 sick.....psyco...story or not... I mean WTF?!"
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Title: I cried too...
Reviewed By: Funkmasterjo On: November 22, 2004 00:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. This is one of the best pieces of work i've seen, why can't eaveryone write like this? The world would be a better place, war and famine could possibly cease to exist as we would all be to happy to be as petty as normal. Anyways, I liked it a lot, I'm off to check your other work now. Actually, if this fic were not a one-shot it would have trully been a momentous occasion, indeed. (heh, 499 charecters in the body)
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Reviewed By: j On: October 11, 2004 05:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
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As far as writing goes, it was excellent (as many people have already said). The only problem I found was I disagree with incest and sex before marrage. But, each to their own. As I said, writing wise, excellent. Keep up the good work.
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