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Title: o_o
Reviewed By: Hapi_San On: October 10, 2004 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jesus christ this is sick... I loved every word of it. :P
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 09:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. You are an artist.
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Title: Flamers are fags.
Reviewed By: Fuckyouflamers On: September 24, 2004 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ALL OF YOU FLAMERS OUT THERE CAN GO SUCK YOUR MOMS DICK. I SAID IT ONCE I'LL SAY IT AGAIN IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT DON'T REVIEW IT. YOU GOT A PROBLEM WITH INCEST THEN DON'T READ IT YOU DUMB FUCKS. YOU KNOW IF YOU READ THE FIRST FEW LINES YOU CAN TELL IT'S INCEST YOU SHOULD HAVE STOPPED THERE. NO YOU HAVE TO GO AND TALK SHIT ABOUT A GREAT FIC REGUARDLESS IF YOU READ IT OR NOT. THIS IS A GOOD FIC THE AUTHOR IS GOODS ITS ALL GOOD BUT YOU LITTLE PUSSY BITCHS HAVE TO TALK SHIT. YOU PROBABLY DON'T LIKE IT BECAUSE IT'S SO MUCH BETTER THEN THE POOR EXCUSE FOR SHIT THAT YOU POST. SO REMEMBER IF YOU DON'T LIKE...DON'T FUCKIN READ IT!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: crazy eyes On: September 03, 2004 23:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
this was some sick shit... im not sure whether to vomit or applaud...
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Title: SO FUCKIN GOOD
Reviewed By: SEX QUEEN On: August 11, 2004 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mman this story so good i humped my bed and mastrbated..ooo yeah
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Reviewed By: Jarock16 On: August 09, 2004 11:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read this back on Adultfanfiction.net and like I said there, I'll say it here. O.O OH MY RA, This is one of the best I've read! One of the most well written fics I've seen. Hope you can do a sequal to this one.
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Reviewed By: Scary-red-eyes On: August 07, 2004 15:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Q_Q (Eye twitching) (Shuddering) (Breath not, er, being breathed) (No Comment...)
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Reviewed By: FUCK YOU ASSHOLE! On: April 26, 2004 15:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
... dude... why? it was sick and wrong! a 13-year old guy having sex with his mom... YOU ARE A GAY FUCKING BITCH-ASS BASTARD!!!!
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Title: The Flame
Reviewed By: Johnny_Bluefire03 On: April 01, 2004 00:24 CST
Comment/Review:
its just a story guys... lighten up. I have one word for this story... *BOING*
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Reviewed By: An Idiot On: March 31, 2004 20:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, it's an interesting ediphus (did I spell that right?) complex that you gave Ash. But, why not continue this? It's quite good.
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Reviewed By: GREAT On: March 06, 2004 20:59 CST
Comment/Review:
THIS IS A GREAT FUCKING FIC INCEST RULES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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Reviewed By: Spickysaiyan On: January 13, 2004 15:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i know incest is wrong,but this story was FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! If you can write a sequal about how Ash comes home and makes love with his mom but if you can try and make it a little longer.
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Title: Youch.
Reviewed By: TrueCharizard [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, this fanfic was brilliant.. the writing style fantastic. But I hated it. I just hate incest. There is nothing right about it. Nothing. I felt like I wanted to throw up. Mrs Ketchum may have been hot.. but could you have sent Brock or Professor Oak in instead, it would have been so much more enjoyable.
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Title: Whoa
Reviewed By: Balamb roast On: December 07, 2003 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this fic was very innocent, but then he goes and f**** his mom! ewwwwwww. This was very good, you should enter this into a squick contest. ugggghhh. need a cold shower...
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Title: `
Reviewed By: Flesh-N-Bone On: November 27, 2003 18:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey I see nothing wrong with this as long as it is fictional. People actually doing that is really sick but fictional is ok. I think the fact that it is wrong is why I read these kinda fics.
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