| "The Hunters" Reviews/Comments [ 106 ] |
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Title: Idea for You
Reviewed By: Neko-chan87 On: May 28, 2004 17:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
I wish you would update soon!If you're just having problems with what to do next, then I have an idea for you. Bring in Isis Ishtar and Shadi. Let's say that there's a ring at the doorbell and Mr. Motou answers it. At first he sees no one but then he looks down and sees Isis (sorry, don't know her JApanese name) lying on the ground in a pool of blood. When she comes to, she tells them that she has the Necklace of Foresight (?) and is here to seek the King of Games help. Her guardians (Shadi and Mokuba Who she hasn't met) and the archeologist she worked for have been kidnapped by Pegasus's men adn she needs help getting them back. There can be a little emotion between her and her brother. And then Isis can get together with Mokuba. ^^ You can use this if you want. I just want a new chapter.
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Reviewed By: *+*+*koumori wolf*+*+* On: March 15, 2004 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O This...is...the...best fic...EVER!!!! Please update as soon as you possibly can!! I'm dying to know what happens!! I wish I had found this while you were writing it so I could have reviewed it a bunch more ^-^. But anywho I just wanted you to know this fanfic is awesome! By far one of the best I've ever read!! So please update this a.s.a.p. I don't know how long I can wait! 9-9 such an interesting story! The plot is SO good!
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Title: Different but Dynamic!
Reviewed By: J Babe On: March 07, 2004 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not much of a vamp fan, but this was done fairly tastefully. Please continue soon!
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Reviewed By: TechnicalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2003 04:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. please update.
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Reviewed By: Vampire Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAY TO COOL! I LOVE THE STORY PLEASE UP DATE SOON! ONE QUESTION IS YAMI A VAMPIRE OR IS HE A HUNTER? Vampire Inuyasha
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Reviewed By: MoonFaerie On: December 05, 2003 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh God I love this story Pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaassssseeeeeeeeeee continue its killing me i gotta know whats gonna happen
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Reviewed By: Bryanna On: December 04, 2003 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh God I love this story Pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaassssseeeeeeeeeee continue its killing me i gotta know whats gonna happen since i am a fan of the dark series i know the basics of the story and well i think this story is awsome
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Reviewed By: Jagkat On: November 04, 2003 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
would you please update, we all really wanna know what happens!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cherry the cuttie ^_^ On: October 14, 2003 15:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
What the heck?! You haven't updated in forever! Write!
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Reviewed By: lothlaide On: September 20, 2003 17:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! Awesome story! Unique kind view on the whole vampire thing...or at least I've never read anything like it. I'm a big fan of Anne Rice's Vampire chronicles myself. Can't wait for the next part! |
Reviewed By: Sprinket [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 03:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey i had to review again cause itz a kewl story and i just love the whole plot idea but i would luv it even more if it had more Ryou/Bakura in it **wink wink** I got inspiration to write my own! Have a look at mine and tell me what you think plz! thanx! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: silverdragon_0120 On: September 06, 2003 06:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really would like if you updated soon. Please? |
Reviewed By: Usako Hashiba On: August 21, 2003 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story a lot. It's very creative and very funny. I love funny stories. I hope the author works more on this story. |
Reviewed By: Immrotal_hunter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 15:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
please continue this is getting good.
I love the story. |
Reviewed By: Zera On: July 23, 2003 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more plz! |
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