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| "The Hunters" Reviews/Comments [ 106 ] | | Pages (8): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 › » ] | Reviewed By: Jadejj On: June 17, 2003 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
We got to have Mai and Isis (as I call her) Isis is the one with the Millume Neckless Shadi has the two Ankh and Scales but I haven't seen him use the Scales so why not give them to Jou | Reviewed By: spellhorn On: June 19, 2003 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luuuuuuuuuuuv this fic and I wish u would update more often. I'm sorry I didn't review but I'm lazy. he sorry ^_^;;
As for ur votes, I say Jou shouldn't have an item. and I don't care about the other caracters but if u put in Keith he must be evil, evil I say, evil
he um....yeah ^_^;;; so keep it up ^_^ | Reviewed By: ........ On: June 17, 2003 16:40 CDT
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WHAT ABOUT MALIK & MARIK!!!!! | Reviewed By: Phoenix1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't give up on us!!
We love this story!!
You have made a very original twist on an old favorite!!
We Love It!!
Please Continue!! | Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey---
are you insane? honestly, i think you may be losing brain cells and have contracted some sort of disease. YOU CAN NOT STOP WRITING THIS STORY!
do i need to repeat it? or spell it out for you?
y-o-u c-a-n n-o-t s-t-o-p w-r-i-t-n-g t-h-i-s s-t-o-r-y !!!!
i would just die if you stopped and left me hanging! i love your writing style. it is insightful, emotional, and it flows very well. i could never write the last chapter that you wrote like you did. it was written so well.....expressing all of jou's pent up emotions, fears, and feelings.
this story has a little bit of everything. it has action, humor, angst, vampires, and best of all, kawaii fluffiness with not one, but four pairings!!! barely any stories can bring together most of the cast's characters and have them fit so well together like yours does. sure, they may be a little OOC, but it works for your story and it makes it that much better.
as for the votes.....
i already think you have enough pairings to deal with, but if you think you can tackle a few more and not take away attention from the main four.....then go for it!
and jou...well he's already a quarter vamp and that's cool but he doesn't really need an item.
if you want to add characters i'd personally like to see mai-hunter, ishizu-hunter, and serenity. go girl power! ^__^;; that sounds so lame....
anyways....please keep writing! (and if you do, update soon!)
keep up the wonderful work!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^
now honestly, would i write a review this long if i didn't like your story? | Reviewed By: Shade A [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 07:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this!!! Please continue soon!
Oh, yeah, votes....... ummmm I think that Honda and Otogi (like yami's cool...) would be a neat couple. I don't see a lot of those, so, yeahhhh....
If Jou would have a Millennium Item... I think he should have the... um... hmmmmmm... *thinks* I dunno.... He's too cute to be given a golden eye!!!!! ^____^ But, it's your story and I'm voting Millennium Eye.
~Shade~
P.S.: Your bonding spells and stuff are cool! | Reviewed By: Kenn On: June 16, 2003 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi!
i started reading thins story yesterday, and i really enjoyed it ^^(ok, that was an understatement, im hooked:p) i hope you continue this story, i relly look forward to the next chapter.
i think you should give Jou an item, i dun know which, cuz im not that faimiliar with the series, but ill try to understand it more>< | Reviewed By: kylawild On: June 16, 2003 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and if you don't continue I think I may cry. Well, maybe not cry but I'd be rather upset.
Sorry for not reviewing before but I don't usually review. I also figured that since this was a good story you were recieving reviews from all over. Bad guess on my part.
Anyways, I dunno about the pairings. I like Mokuba/Serenity and Honda/Otogi (are those the right names?) I'd kinda like to see Isis (I can't remember the other name right now) paired with someone but I don't know who.
As to an item for Jou, is it really necessary? I guess it would make it fit with the rest of the group more. The only problem is I don't know all the items. I know the puzzle, ring, rod, eye, necklace and this one other one that Seto had in another story. Sorry but I can't help you on this as I like Isis with the necklace and how would they get the Eye away from Pegasus?
One little question though. You know how you have the hunters changing into certain animals? Yami->dog, Seto->cat, Marik->ferret; what is it that Bakura turns into? I didn't recognize the name at all.
Thanks for reading this and an even bigger thanks for writing the story. Please, please, PLEASE, don't stop with this one. I love your Yin & Yang fic as well. (That is you right? ::sweatdrop::) Don't stop that one either. | Reviewed By: sapphire On: June 16, 2003 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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it would be a shame to stop writing this as i look most days to see if you have updated - i'm sorry to say i'm really bad at reviewing a story cause if i like it that's all i ever say - and it is a good story - as to adding other charcters - if it can go with the plot line then if you wish to add them - with regards to a m/item - jou is already special enough if you give him too much i think it would lose the way he is - good story though and i will try and be a responabile reader and review more often - hopefully you will continue this though | Reviewed By: Neko-chan35 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Christine Feehan! She's the bomb! I'm so glad someone has used her ideas in a fic, it makes e happy. By the way, this is good!
Your Fan and Fellow Author,
Neko-chan35 | Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 10:55 CDT
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Karen: Please continue the stroy. I would miss it if you stopped ;_;
LD: Hey, contragts on the job. Money is good ^_^ Hey, if you continue (please, please, please)I think Otogi and Shadi together as hunters would be cool! Then, how about... Mai as a hunter with Honda... and Anzu with Keith as a good guy.
Karen: Weird.
LD: *shrugs * I like the unconventional. Besides, I want to see Mai summon the Harpy Lady. ^_^
Karen: That would be cool. So please give us another chapter. PPPPLLLLLEEEAAAASSSSSE | Reviewed By: Lady Bum [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 10:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I think that Jou should get a thingy, but I don't now all of them so... Please update soon. This is my favorite Yugioh fanfic. | Reviewed By: myst-ikal On: June 16, 2003 10:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DO NOT EVEN THINK OF QUITTING THIS STORY!!!!! I look forward to reading your updates, and though this is my first time writing a review for it, I'm sure there are many people that love this story as much as I do.
Vote:
1# - I think that you should leave the couples as is and not add any more, unless you're going to make your chapters longer. I belive that if you add more couples/characters, then you're taking away story time from the couples you already have.
2# I'm not saying that I don't like Jou, because I do but NO, Jou should NOT have an item! He's a very strong quarter vampire and will make a very powerful full, why does he need a item? If he has one; from what you've written about him, he might be stronger than Yami! Especially if he's able to draw power from the item.
Maybe Shadi could have the rest and they have to play a Shadow Game or something to get them. Or have a couple of them buried in Yami's tomb or scattered all over the world and they could have a ton of adventures finding them. | Reviewed By: Silvia Sci Fi On: June 16, 2003 09:39 CDT
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I'm loving your story but I'm not reviewing all the chapters because my english sucks.
I'm fine reading but not writing.
You'r doing a great job here, please don't stop. | Reviewed By: Alexis On: June 16, 2003 04:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!! My friend, Shadow told me to read this and it's good and I'm glad to read it.
Vote 1: I wanna Otogi to be like Yami!!! And, Mokuba too since he's Seto's little brother but make him a half.
Vote 2: I think he should have one and I vote for that... what's it call? The key, is it? Oh well. That the item I want him to have. | | Pages (8): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 › » ] |
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