| "The Hunters" Reviews/Comments [ 106 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kiana On: June 28, 2003 05:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I HAVE TO SEE THE NEXT PART!Please update soon or i'll go crazy!Maybe i could bribe you...hm.*gives pocky*Now write! |
Reviewed By: Sprinket On: June 27, 2003 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv this fic plz write more o + don make any more pairs itz good as it iz! This is probably the best fan fic i hav eva red so plz write another like tis or add another chap k! |
Reviewed By: Saphirerose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and can't wait for the next part. Also, I have always thought Joey should have gotten an item. Personally I think the Eye should belong to him. Anyway, Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Shelly On: June 20, 2003 03:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Objection! I didn't read and hide...
I just read this story last night~~~
and it was great!
(even greater thing was I read through the WHOLE 21 chapters...)
I wish I could found this story earlier...
it's so GOOD~ make my life more interesting~
voting two
An item.... maybe the necklace?
Although the idea of torturing that P-thing-ma-gi-ga by taking out the EYE is quiet tempting... *EVIL LAUGH*
I remembered it was a MAJOR Ouchie...
So not the EYE, not the EYE! Jou already got a pair of powerful and attractive eyes (well.. to Seto and me at least) ^^
Anyway... I think I am talking..eh... typing too much again...(I ALWAYS DO THIS)
I'll wait for the next chapter(s!) with *move Jou in front of me* PUPPY EYES ^^ |
Reviewed By: star shadow On: June 19, 2003 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU CAN'T STOP WRITING THIS FIC. I love this fic, it is creative and really differnt then any other fic I have read. So PLEASE DO NOT STOP.
Voting:
no Jou should not have an item, he is already a quater and has powers, that all he needs. Adding an item would only distract from that.
I think maybe you could put Otogi in as a hunter and have him with Honda, and maybe work in Mai and Serinity in. BUT only if it wouldn't distract from the main 4 pairing, like maybe as a side story. :) |
Reviewed By: Red Lion On: June 19, 2003 00:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ya updated! YEA!!! Hidden Thoughts Revealed was great! I've been hooked on this story since it came out! I so love it!
As for the voting, not sure. I think it would be fun with more characters, but I wouldn't want ya to be swamped. Ya are doing great with the characters ya got! And I love the bond between all of them to each other!
As for vote 2, I vote not to give Jou an item. What makes the others special, besides them being them, is that they have the items (except for Malik who is also tainted - nice add there). Jou is special cause he is a quarter and who his ancestor is. He doesn't need an item with that background. I think he is well balanced with the others' powers without it.
Okay...that was probably more than ya wanted to know. I will try to be patient as I wait for the next chapter. And congrads about finding a job! |
Reviewed By: Jadejj On: June 17, 2003 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
We got to have Mai and Isis (as I call her) Isis is the one with the Millume Neckless Shadi has the two Ankh and Scales but I haven't seen him use the Scales so why not give them to Jou |
Reviewed By: spellhorn On: June 19, 2003 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luuuuuuuuuuuv this fic and I wish u would update more often. I'm sorry I didn't review but I'm lazy. he sorry ^_^;;
As for ur votes, I say Jou shouldn't have an item. and I don't care about the other caracters but if u put in Keith he must be evil, evil I say, evil
he um....yeah ^_^;;; so keep it up ^_^ |
Reviewed By: ........ On: June 17, 2003 16:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
WHAT ABOUT MALIK & MARIK!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Phoenix1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't give up on us!!
We love this story!!
You have made a very original twist on an old favorite!!
We Love It!!
Please Continue!! |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey---
are you insane? honestly, i think you may be losing brain cells and have contracted some sort of disease. YOU CAN NOT STOP WRITING THIS STORY!
do i need to repeat it? or spell it out for you?
y-o-u c-a-n n-o-t s-t-o-p w-r-i-t-n-g t-h-i-s s-t-o-r-y !!!!
i would just die if you stopped and left me hanging! i love your writing style. it is insightful, emotional, and it flows very well. i could never write the last chapter that you wrote like you did. it was written so well.....expressing all of jou's pent up emotions, fears, and feelings.
this story has a little bit of everything. it has action, humor, angst, vampires, and best of all, kawaii fluffiness with not one, but four pairings!!! barely any stories can bring together most of the cast's characters and have them fit so well together like yours does. sure, they may be a little OOC, but it works for your story and it makes it that much better.
as for the votes.....
i already think you have enough pairings to deal with, but if you think you can tackle a few more and not take away attention from the main four.....then go for it!
and jou...well he's already a quarter vamp and that's cool but he doesn't really need an item.
if you want to add characters i'd personally like to see mai-hunter, ishizu-hunter, and serenity. go girl power! ^__^;; that sounds so lame....
anyways....please keep writing! (and if you do, update soon!)
keep up the wonderful work!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^
now honestly, would i write a review this long if i didn't like your story? |
Reviewed By: Shade A [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 07:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this!!! Please continue soon!
Oh, yeah, votes....... ummmm I think that Honda and Otogi (like yami's cool...) would be a neat couple. I don't see a lot of those, so, yeahhhh....
If Jou would have a Millennium Item... I think he should have the... um... hmmmmmm... *thinks* I dunno.... He's too cute to be given a golden eye!!!!! ^____^ But, it's your story and I'm voting Millennium Eye.
~Shade~
P.S.: Your bonding spells and stuff are cool! |
Reviewed By: Kenn On: June 16, 2003 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi!
i started reading thins story yesterday, and i really enjoyed it ^^(ok, that was an understatement, im hooked:p) i hope you continue this story, i relly look forward to the next chapter.
i think you should give Jou an item, i dun know which, cuz im not that faimiliar with the series, but ill try to understand it more>< |
Reviewed By: kylawild On: June 16, 2003 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and if you don't continue I think I may cry. Well, maybe not cry but I'd be rather upset.
Sorry for not reviewing before but I don't usually review. I also figured that since this was a good story you were recieving reviews from all over. Bad guess on my part.
Anyways, I dunno about the pairings. I like Mokuba/Serenity and Honda/Otogi (are those the right names?) I'd kinda like to see Isis (I can't remember the other name right now) paired with someone but I don't know who.
As to an item for Jou, is it really necessary? I guess it would make it fit with the rest of the group more. The only problem is I don't know all the items. I know the puzzle, ring, rod, eye, necklace and this one other one that Seto had in another story. Sorry but I can't help you on this as I like Isis with the necklace and how would they get the Eye away from Pegasus?
One little question though. You know how you have the hunters changing into certain animals? Yami->dog, Seto->cat, Marik->ferret; what is it that Bakura turns into? I didn't recognize the name at all.
Thanks for reading this and an even bigger thanks for writing the story. Please, please, PLEASE, don't stop with this one. I love your Yin & Yang fic as well. (That is you right? ::sweatdrop::) Don't stop that one either. |
Reviewed By: sapphire On: June 16, 2003 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
it would be a shame to stop writing this as i look most days to see if you have updated - i'm sorry to say i'm really bad at reviewing a story cause if i like it that's all i ever say - and it is a good story - as to adding other charcters - if it can go with the plot line then if you wish to add them - with regards to a m/item - jou is already special enough if you give him too much i think it would lose the way he is - good story though and i will try and be a responabile reader and review more often - hopefully you will continue this though |
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