| "In One Breath" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: 12blue12 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 19:10 CST
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oh nice suspence coolie ending g2 say well hope u updaate soon but um well u kinda wrote that kagome clmbed out of hell and was about to fall into the hell wen shippou jumped into her arms. well cya!
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Reviewed By: Kurai On: June 03, 2003 20:30 CDT
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^______^ cute! All fluffy but cute. I like this fic, though not crazie over it ... not your fault since I'm into Angst, like really really one of them die and hopeless future angst that almost half of the time end in tragidy ... so yea ... hehehe this is the first fluff I've read that I actually continued to read on, prolly cause I like all the insight stuff into thier minds and I really like the quotes! About this thing : "Kagome flung herself at Sesshoumaru and hugged his feet." o_____O? What did she do? Prostrate herself at his feet? Fall face down in front of him?? Hugged his FEET??? @_____@ So very mind boggling ... ^o^ well Good Luck with all your fics! |
Reviewed By: Kurai On: June 03, 2003 20:06 CDT
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anou...not to be so critisizing ... but Kaijuu ja nai mo should be Kaijuu ja nai yo or just Kaijuu ja nai, mo is (though not exactly the same) the jap version of too, or also, Kaijuu ja nai mo would be I'm not a monster too (as in implying someone already said Kaijuu ja nai) ... so ya ... (I'm actually pretty sure about this one *nods*) sumimasen! Ganbare! |
Reviewed By: Kurai On: June 03, 2003 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very unique yet again! Like your plots very much, though haven't finish reading all the posted chapters for this one yet. Usually review at the end but just dropping a message pointing out something I don't understand. Donata no hate ni? er.. translates in to "end of who/which?" ... since donata is which/who and hate is the end ... er... so I don't think that actually works for which is worse x______x... but if you are sure then ... (not very good at jap yet) .. but I'm pretty sure that won't work. *goes back to reading next chapter* |
Reviewed By: Ami On: April 11, 2003 15:16 CDT
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I think this is a great story, can't wait to read more. I don't like too many fics with Kag and Sess, but I really enjoy this one, it's more realistic. I'll be waiting for an update. |
Reviewed By: kagomesirene [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 11:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well I donīt know why you get so few reviews, either!
I really really luv your story!
So keep on writing and update soon!
Ja ne |
Reviewed By: claudia67g On: April 06, 2003 15:18 CDT
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I think this is very good.
Only complaint i have is it felt to fast but i still enjoy it and look forward to seeing more of your story. |
Reviewed By: KawaiiAngel On: April 05, 2003 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry up and update the next chapter here or at ff.net! ^_^
~* Ja Ne *~ ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Souru On: April 05, 2003 02:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect!Perfect! It is totally Perfect! More more more more more more! Please! Perfect! |
Reviewed By: Lizzycat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 00:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* I need a tissue. I loved this fic! The first chapters where Kagome told Inuyasha were a bit heart wrenching. I found myself yelling at the computer screen telling Inuyasha what a jerk he was. (This earned a few strange looks from my cat and fiance.) Anyways, I can't wait for the next update! Great job so far! (By the way, thank you for making your quotes in the beginning of each chapter ACTUALLY tie in to the story. It's annoying when people use random quotes or song lyrics that don't coincide with their stories.) Crap, it's 11:50 and I have to work at 6 am. I need to get to sleep. This is all your fault I'm up late! hehe not that i actually mind! The story was worth it. Keep up the good work and keep those chapters coming! |
Reviewed By: Sailor Cosmos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story! good plot, a bit cliche but you show everyhting so clearly that I find this better than alot of the other Sess/Kag. I'm usually a Inu/Kag fan but I'm very tolerant. I love the story! It shows so much of true human emotion. good job. Keep writing. |
