| "The Married Life" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: marcy On: August 31, 2004 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story love it. so can u pretty please put another chapter and tell how the weding is and the huneymoon was to preatty please.
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Reviewed By: sailormoonmarisa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought it was good. But in some parts kind of confusing. but good all the same. good luck. :) SSM ^_^
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Reviewed By: britney7 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2002 00:50 CST
Comment/Review:
well, what happened 2 s+s? i really wanna noe1 soo... pls conyinue! |
Reviewed By: Sarah On: November 29, 2001 05:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your sentences tend to ramble. Please make your thoughts more coherent. Use punctuations in your sentences. |
