| "Opposing Realities" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: NeNa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is a good fic you have here. Keep up the great work. I can not wait to see what happens next!! |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi, I thiink I accidently pressed the wrong button...so if the webmaster says anything about your fic...eheheh...sowwy. But besides that, this was a great chapter!! WOOT! I can finally get into MM!! It's been so long!!! Keep it coming ya know! |
Reviewed By: Kantras On: May 02, 2003 00:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like your fic. (Yeah, yeah, I know, constructive criticism is the best thing a reader a can give.)
There's plot --- and I'll be very very happy to see more of that --- which is more than I can say for some other people's fics, and generally, everything's cool. I can't even spot spelling/grammar mistakes --- there are usually some that make me want to smack my head on the wall.
I'd say that you're really good, and I bet that you're going to get really good reviews. :P
(See, the problem with a good fic is that contructive criticism is bloody hard to give.)
Hope to see more of your stuff soon! I think your style, plot and English-usage rock. :D
Hope your muses give in to your sheer persistence soon. ^_____^ And I love your Duo, y'know that? He's cool! XD |
Reviewed By: SpiritKat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2003 07:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey I love your fic, I hope that your muse will alow you to post more soon, I can't wait til the next chap. Keep Writing:) |
Reviewed By: Airen On: April 05, 2003 01:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting start, and well-written. I'm looking forward to the next part. I'm curious, though...how could Duo not have eaten for two weeks and not be weak with hunger? One would think that he would hardly be able to function.
But whatever, what do I know. Anyway, excellent fic! |
