Reviewed By: Sakiku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 07:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, wow, that is a great idea! I love Bardok, and your character Tean is great, too. Her mental abilities are just great! But, what do you mean by her trying to go SSJ3 at 6 years? don't you think that is a little bit too early, even with the fantastic power all demi-saiyans have?
I am waiting for you to introduce Bardok to the others, that's gonna be great. Keep writing, and PLEASE update soon!!!!!! |
