| "Mysterious Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: t recorder On: June 22, 2006 08:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was asome i dont reviw till the end so here it is complitly fantastic [horrible speller kay] loved it but why dident yami come out more i mean to save yugi from bakura or yuki ? t recorder
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Title: Liking it
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its getting good I cant wait to find out who the girl is though she sounds like she could be his twin.
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Reviewed By: Realy Baaad Grl On: August 01, 2004 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Realy nice. i'm a wee bit confused though...but I still liked it.I has a lotta death. Quite the enjoyable. ^__^
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Reviewed By: joey's girl On: July 06, 2004 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow drama and dakness*thinks about it* i like it.But Yes ppl if you guys haven't caught on "yuki" looks and sounds"ALOT" like yugi coindience i think not.But I have another thing to add i think Kana anf yuki r trying to tell something to "seto" yeah maybe i dunno.but Kan and yuki are two dif.personalties.But seto is pretty cold-hearted but notice he's changed sine the acciendent huh?Well i think yuki is related yugi and BAm i knew yugi parents died.Iknow fan "fics" aren't real but still.I*appauld* you on this fan fic it actually follows the show storyline a little.Just to add marik isn't there he went back to Egypt not to complain but just saying.Love you story please hurry up the nxt 6 chapeters or.What does yuki say to yugi?*ponders and paces*LOL
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: July 05, 2004 18:38 CDT
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Thanks so much for updating. Love the chappies. Hey what did happen to Mokuba anyway? It's confusing me. Update soon. Yugi and the others have to be okay. They're great friends, but they're like family to me. ;_;
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Reviewed By: O.O; On: July 04, 2004 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack! Con/tin/ue! O.O
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: June 30, 2004 18:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Don't let ANY of them die! Not Tea. Not Ryou(Bakura). Where's Mokuba anyway? And what is wrong with that little girl? She's really mysterious. Is she somehow related to Yugi? And it seems that she lives by herself and has never even went to school. Tea and Ryou(Bakura) have to get better, Mokuba found safe and sound, and I want Yugi and the others safe. Also it seems like you didn't update since April 5 this year. I hope your still there, I need to find out that the gang is okay. Ummm.. I hope that wasn't too harsh. It just that I feel really close to Yugi and the others. -_-U Well PLEASE update soon. *chibi eyes*
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Reviewed By: SilverNightingale [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story you have here. It's veiled in mystery and I love the way you write it. This is the first time I've read this kind of fic and I'm really enjoying it. Kindly update soon, okay? I really want to know what would happen next. You have one heck of a potential to be a great writer. Never stop writing.
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Reviewed By: agirlwho likesthisfanfic On: April 09, 2004 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfic. Update!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl ^_^ On: April 06, 2004 07:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
no! Ryou!
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Reviewed By: Sarah [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 21:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Please,PLEASE do more! I'm addicted to your fics,especially this one! I love it! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Dragon's Liar On: January 22, 2004 23:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok. Great story. But who the bloody heck is Kana? Where'd she come from? This story is great, but I'm gettin' confused. And that bloody docter better not hurt Ryou or Bakura, whichever he is... Well please keep going. I did'nt go thru all the trouble of finding this site for nothing. ^-^
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Title: Change Of Heart
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay first thing, it starts off with that mystery girl, and then kinda goes off on a tangent. I mean its actually a good story, but its like chapter one has nothing to do with the rest of the story. It would of been nice, if you had put a little more information about the girl, the one that Yugi and Joey saw in the picture, and Yugi saw in his dream. Like I'm guessing she's the same girl thats giggling( but then maybe she isn't) it's like confusing. Are they the same person? I like the whole Kaiba drama thing, but it would of been nice if you had tied the two things together in some way already. Maybe your waiting till the end? Well I really hope this isnt actually completed yet,cause it can't end yet. Oh and Does Ryou Bakura( Bakura as he's called in the english anime) Have a Yami? Is he going to have a Yami? (Bakura). Cause you started calling Ryou, Bakura and then calling him Ryou. Which is confusing lol. Cause well I know that they have different names in the japanese anime and english anime, so thats why I was confused, cause usually the hikari bakura is known as Ryou and the Yami Balura is known as Bakura. Well Please continue, I think this could be a really good story.
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Reviewed By: xyza On: October 18, 2003 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rated you that way because I really enjoyed what you have written.I hope you'll update real fast and I want to know what happened to Bakura.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Tamer7 On: September 27, 2003 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its kul.But Tae,Seto,and Ryou BETTER NOT die!!!!
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