| "Revisiting Yesterday" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 06:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, well, well, I'm playing around on MM, clicking random pages - and I find this!! It was wonderful! So beautifully written and poetic... I loved the last line... really powerful... I fell all choked now...*sniff* |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, EM, what a great way to pull us in! You can practically hear Trunks' heart breaking - such turmoil.
I'm looking forward to the possibilities... |
Reviewed By: SirPsychoSexy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You put a lot of emotion into this, way to go! ^^ I can't wait for more...it seems so genuine...
-Armand |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 17:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOW, the opening lines were beautiful.
What emotion and detail, I love it. |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awesome! When do you plan on updating? I'm not totally into male/male stories...but it told right I've got a open mind to them, so I'm really anixous to see how you continue this. Your proluge has really pulled me in...now show us your stuff! :) |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 11:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh EM, this is WONDERFUL!! So beautiful, and expressive, and melancholy! Poor Trunks is just so miserable, and you've captured that in such touching detail!! What an excellent start! I can't wait for the next installment to see what happens!! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 08:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww.. this is really good so far ^_^ poor Trunks... so much heart ache...
you did a great job describing his emotions... *sniffel*
write more soon! |
