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| "Just For One Night" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: *forgot to make a point ... as usual*
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 01:35 CST
Comment/Review:
A point that I wanted to make was how your story is a perfect manifestation of the hidden desires of many hearts/souls. In our lives, we often come across the "what if" person. As in, "what if I saw them again..." Often, we fantasize that we'd "show them" how we felt. I say this to people like Zechs Merquise and Lucretzia Noin: if you can live the dream (accepting all consequences of course-- that should go without saying. I'm not telling people to be promiscuous!) ...then do. Don't wonder. Dreaming is nice, but a regret of a lonely heart lingers ...
| Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 01:28 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's hard for me to review lemons, really, it is. (Mostly 'cause I'm an amitted hentai and bad writer of lemons;) I love that song. "One Night" by The Corrs. I might try and download that *cough*illegally*cough* He he... I love the idea of Zechs and Lucretzia getting together-- even if only once. (I HATE the idea of that being the only time, of course) I was left satisfied and wanting in the same breath. But when you mentioned another songfic called "Like the Wind," my heart sang. One, Zechs is Wind. Heck yeah. Two, the wind is my element. (Preferred, not astrological. Taureans are earthy in nature. But I am airborne in spirit.) I actually have a collection of poems called "For I Am The Wind"(Non posted) and one of my alteregos is Yokaze Hisui. (Jade Nightwind) Further off the subject... As I loaded up your author page to read the... *ahem* ... climax, I noticed ADSALAD was at 29999 visits. Now, it's 30005, and counting... anyway, I just wanted to show you how often it's being visited. Gee... did I even review the chapter? Sorry, I got on a few tirades... Take care of yourself, Eri, and write often when you have the heart. The time comes second. ^_~
| Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins* I wonder what's gonna happen...
^.~
I like what you did with Noin's characterization-- I thought it was dead on. It's wierd, some people don't like her because she blindly follows Zechs wherever he goes. I find her flawless devotion scary ... as well as beautiful.
I LOVED the "collage." ;) |
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