| "What Might Have Happened" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: korona On: March 02, 2005 12:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ugh, thanks a lot for turning a wonderful character into a thinly-veiled Mary Sue, you talentless hack. This sort of device would only work if you stuck to a little something called "characterization". Maybe if you watched to show or read the manga, you'd know I mean. As it is, please refrain from inflicting your fantasies of screwing Yami on the rest of the world - it's a lot like masturbation, and you wouldn't want anyone to see you doing that, now, would you?
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Reviewed By: ailisa On: February 26, 2005 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more more more more more more more more more. please write more soon. want to see yami get some.
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Reviewed By: Tiara [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, I just LOOOOOOOOOVE the YugiXYami-pairing. Changing Yugi into a girl is quite original, but making her that sarcastic is WAAAAAAY COOOOOOOOL!!!!!!! (In case you didn't notice, I'm a tat hyper.) Anyway,this is my first review here, so... It think it's a really great story!!!!!!! *bounces* But this story is rather long not updated, so I was wondering when you would...Please continue soon. Pretty please? *does puppy-dog-eyes with the whole Yu-Gi-Oh-cast, minus Tea*
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Reviewed By: phoenixaggie06 On: September 06, 2003 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. Yugi makes a cute girl. And I love the attitude. It is very different to make Isis the villian, but it fits perfectly in the plot. I hope you update soon. Ja ne. |
Reviewed By: ssj4sailormenz On: July 18, 2003 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely *adored* this fic! I love what you've done with Yugi! *hentai grin* I love the pairing too. YamixYugi all the way!!!! I just can't wait for the next chapter! You will update soon, right? E-mail if you have time! (ssj4sailormenz@hotmail.com) |
Reviewed By: Dark_Wind [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 21:02 CDT
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I love this story!! Please update soon!!!! ^_^ *Gives author puppy eyes.* |
Reviewed By: sapphire On: June 14, 2003 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the strength of yugi's character it is so refreshing to see a character that is not played as a wimp - this yugi is fun to read and hope we have more soon and like the others i hope we have a yami and yugi pairing |
Reviewed By: Oakland Peanuts On: June 14, 2003 00:28 CDT
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By the way, like Sandy said, could you make this a Yugi/Yami pairing? It's my numero uno favorite pairing. |
Reviewed By: Oakland Peanuts On: June 14, 2003 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more. I'm really impatient, as it's been a long time since you've updated. |
Reviewed By: Sandy On: April 07, 2003 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good but can you make it Yugi/Yami paring. I love this paring!! Thanks! Be sure to write more |
