| "The Symphony of Pain" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: SaiyaSith [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2002 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really good story. It was angsty, but then, I like that in stories! I am really impressed with how well you pulled this off.
It really has heart! Great job! |
Reviewed By: Hayley On: March 09, 2002 10:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In places a bit tough (I'm not used to this sort of stuff - very British you see) but the emotions were incredible and seem to match my own ideas on the kind of things Vegeta suffered and why he was like he was. |
Reviewed By: Jin-chan (smcow911@aol.com) On: February 10, 2002 10:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woow, good fic, but very sick... don't get me wrong though. I loved it. |
Reviewed By: nikki On: January 03, 2002 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love reading fanfics about vegeta but this one was the best i ever read.i loved the way you showed the other side of vegeta.the other writers didnt show it the way u did.i especially loved the little poem at the end.it was so touching.i could not stop reading it.please write more fanfics.you are truly an excellent writer.this story really touched me. |
Reviewed By: mimi On: December 15, 2001 04:41 CST
Comment/Review:
wow! when i 1st started out reding this fic, i had no idea it was gonna b like this! it almost actually made me cry! (& if u know me, thats pretty deep)
i congratulate u. this would have 2 b 1 of the greatest fics i eva red! even though it was pretty sad & depressing, i couldnt get enough! beautiful ending.
it really showed & said alot. u must have a real talet & u placed everything in so well! iv never written a review on a fanfic before, but 4 this 1, i just had 2!
keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: - Amanda. On: November 24, 2001 09:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font Color That was -- wow.. That seems like something that could easily be made into another saga -- one placed in before the Furii-za saga, ne? I just wanted to congradulate you -- so, omedetou. n_n! Well -- if anyone ever wants to talk to me -- e-mail Chou Juuhachi@aol.com, an' such -- I hope you write another fanfiction soon -- I'll keep coming back for updates. :x! Well -- Jaaa! |
Reviewed By: Tina M.C. On: October 21, 2001 16:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Im an artist, not an author, therefor, I only browse through the fanart section. I saw your fanart for your fanfic so i decided to read it....and I must say, I was deeply touched by it! Brilliant work! Deserves a high 10/10 ^_^ |
Reviewed By: CRIMSON FLAMES On: October 22, 2001 13:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi I just read your fic, It's awsome , i'M ALMOST CRYING! you showed a side of vegta no one else has ,hats off you did great! |
Reviewed By: geta On: October 28, 2001 20:11 CST
Comment/Review:
I think you're a brilliant writer. I love Vegeta even more now... write more,k? I would love to see your portrayal of Vegeta's thoughts as he fight Zarbon on Namek! |
Reviewed By: Chibi Hoshi On: November 04, 2001 14:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow.... *sniffles and dries her tears* that was... powerful. Sad and dark and touching to the soul. If pure emotions can be captured, you've just done it. This is one of the best fics I've ever read (I've read hundreds)and you should write more. |
