| "Can't Stand the Heat, Stay Away From Fire" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: bunny453 On: October 04, 2005 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: technical dragon On: January 22, 2004 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleaze update!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: November 29, 2003 21:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Good job! I hope you continue! I was just wondering hoe sure you were on the Yoai. I don't care either way. Please continue! Adios!
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Reviewed By: Platerair Queen On: July 25, 2003 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Woot! What a marvelous story! :D Please, continue this soon! I must see an update! ^_^ I love yaoi, I'm a yaoi fangirl! ^_^ Please, continue soon! |
Reviewed By: Diamond On: April 15, 2003 16:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter, keep it up. |
Reviewed By: minoru On: April 08, 2003 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
the writing's not bad..descriptive, nice from 1st person pov...but it needs mroe direction...doesn't really seem to go anywhere...even if u intend to continue chapters..u were only able to introduce ur chars and that didnt seem to be adequate..good start tho...very promising..... |
Reviewed By: Tea Fan On: April 06, 2003 23:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
O_O Oops. Pardon me. I didn't see the yaoi part in your summary. ^_^o Hehe, oh well. You're still a great writer! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Tea Fan On: April 06, 2003 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ Well I'd have to say that I like the idea so far. Lol, I'm a sucker when it comes to well-written stories, good plot or not. It's just the mood and the style that people writes with that gets me. Those who tell stories well can make even picking your nose sound like the most thrilling thing in the world, and you're one of those people. ^_~
Concerning the story, wow! And this is your first fic? I'm liking it already. It seems that you have even numbers on each side, four Raiders and four Demons. :pauses: Will this fic by any chance end up being yaoi and/or yuri? If so, then I'm afraid that I would be greatly disappointed for the fact that non-yaoi stories are rare these days. I was just wondering that because you have three boys and one girl on each team, so might partner them up so. If it ends up not being yaoi and/or yuri, then yay! I'd personally love having a Anzu paired up with Ryou, Bakura, Yami, or Yugi and Mai with Joey if you don't do yaoi/yuri fic. Either way, I'd just like to welcome you and say that you seem to be a great writer.
Please continue and keep up the great work! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Shade A [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 15:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE!!!! Please? |
