| "Professional Hero" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: :emaN On: December 13, 2004 12:26 CST
Comment/Review:
This is one of the best written LoZ works I've ever read. I love you.
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Reviewed By: Caranril On: July 16, 2004 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite a few errors, I must say, but the plot and twists totally make up for it. I'm such a fan of Linky, and so many of his other fans who write fics just don't capture his essence in their imagination. Yours, however, was OUTSTANDING! If it had been a novel, I wouldn't have been able to put it down. You definitely need to try some more, whether they be Zelda fanfics or other interests. Just one word of advice (actually several, but you get the picture): don't name all the kids after previous characters. The little tags on the end like "Zora" or nicknames like "Goro" really helped, but otherwise I was rather confused. *grin* But I'd say I got the general idea. Write on!
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Reviewed By: DG On: April 22, 2004 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, the only thing left that I am still wondering about is at the end of the Epilogue, Zelda hears something in her head that indicaits that there was someone else useing her for something, maybe indictating that Link's children will be returning as heros in a sequal, but I may just be reading it incorectly, so an extremly good fanfic and I do hope to see a sequal if one will be made.
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Reviewed By: Shadow Paladin On: February 27, 2004 16:26 CST
Comment/Review:
another great chapter
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Reviewed By: SuperSage On: January 22, 2004 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story so far. I can't wait until you update again. Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: pyro12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 13:22 CST
Comment/Review:
why the hell aren't people reviewing? This fic kicks ass!
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Reviewed By: Zeros On: December 11, 2003 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could have sworn I had already written and sent a reveiw. o well Dude U have read my mind. This is exactly what I've got in my overactive imagination (with a few things different) KEEP WRITTING BEFORE I AM FORCED TO HUNT YOU DOWN
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Reviewed By: Zeros On: December 11, 2003 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could have sworn I had already written and sent a reveiw. o well Dude U have read my mind. This is exactly what I've got in my overactive imagination (with a few things different) Keep writting or I will be forced to hunt u down.
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Reviewed By: pyro12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Some grammatical errors, but a very good fic, keep at it.
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Reviewed By: KangarooTHEgreat On: November 26, 2003 17:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must impress that this is indeed a great fanfic. But are you going to finish it? It was been nearly twenty days and still a chapter is yet to be added. Have you quit so soon? I most definately hope not. Please keep up the great work! I await the next chapter. Sincerely Sincere, "Kangaroo"
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Reviewed By: KangarooTHEgreat On: September 06, 2003 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Fanfic is one of hundreds I've read and I'll tell you now that it is indeed one of the best i've ever read. Nintendo could easily play this story into it's timeline and the way you effectively use foreshadowing and voice is just unbelievable. 'Tis an original masterpiece and worthy of recognition. Complete entertainment and enjoyment for a whole 4hrs. I thank ye for writin' such a masterful piece. If anyone disagrees, then they can e-mail me at KangarooTHEgreat@yahoo.com. |
Reviewed By: Infiniti On: August 13, 2003 22:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok 2 things i love you and i hate you i love you for writeing this fic and keeping me buisey for 5 1/2hours because i was bored before i started reading and i hate you because you stopped just stoped just cut off please write more i need to know what happends and also i got the idea in later chaptors thayt zelda turned in to kind of a bitch twords link you know what would make this ic better a nice bitter sweet lemony lemon full of lust actually i think that would make it better because i like reading romance in this area hey can you do me a favor e-mail me back with you responce to this when you read this ok its BlackDragon238@aol.com ok also im white some people think im black because of the screen name but i just like dragons is that terrable oh that was more then 2 that was like 5 or 6 ok great fic 2 words I loved it! |
Reviewed By: Minerva_Athena On: August 02, 2003 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great fanfic you should really go on with this fanfic. I think four words are enough:
Your fanfic is GREAT! |
Reviewed By: ShadowDoll On: July 17, 2003 03:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice...am I the only reveiwer bc my computer isn't showing other reviews. Like I said I liked that and I'd love you to continue. |
