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"Love Hina: Dark Zero style" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ]
 Reviewed By: shadowdragonking666 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 18, 2006 10:13 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10
Comment/Review:
what are with all of the stupid O's???
 Title: Yo tis me Darkzero
Reviewed By: True Dark Zero [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 08, 2003 17:32 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ok peoples i've been gone away for some time but the next chapter should be in in a day or two.... maybe three depending on whats goin on in my life *sorries to keep you waiting but its been a hellish few months * sorry again and suuXjak is up next... then the plot and other stuff will be revealed :D
 Title: update plz
Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja  On: December 04, 2003 17:25 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You seem to be answering a lot of the reveiws but you really need to update a lot more.
 Title: I`m back
Reviewed By: Concrete KaOn  On: November 07, 2003 17:48 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well Dark Zero whats going on. I`m back but your not writing. WHY? Needs some more man, this is a very good fic
 Title: Dork
Reviewed By: Dark Zero  On: November 03, 2003 18:42 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ok this is for the fat kid... IF YOU WOULD READ THE NOTES IT SAYS THERE IS THE MAIN STORY AND LITTLE SIDE STORIES THAT HAVE NOTHING TO DO WITH THE MAIN STORY!!!! (ahem) anyway it was'nt me who wrote that fic but whoever did, did a very good job and kaolla and suu are married cuz THEY ARE HOMOSEXUAL'S IN THAT PETICULAR FIC!!!!! (so there)
 Title: GET THE RETARTED ATUFF OUT OF THE FIC
Reviewed By: Fat kid who eats too much  On: November 02, 2003 15:29 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a good fic but there is so many stupid things you put in it. WHat has the latest story have to do with the main plot? Also, why are SHinobu and Kaolla married?! That is so stupid!
 Reviewed By: Concrete KaOn  On: July 25, 2003 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Thankz menting me man real nice of you but you gatts keep writing cuz this fic can only get better
 Reviewed By: Concrete KaOn  On: July 18, 2003 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ok Ok Ok

What ARE YOU DOING YOU NEED TO UPDATE THIS FIC IT IS REALLY GOOD SO UPDATE IT
 Reviewed By: HentaiConnor [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 16, 2003 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like ur story, it's entertaining.
You should keep writing.
 Reviewed By: Concrete_KaOn  On: July 01, 2003 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Come on keep writing these I love` em your a good writer
 Reviewed By: the shadow  On: April 09, 2003 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey zero finally i've been waiting

truly the best

see you in space, cowboy ( or at your house)
 Reviewed By: True Dark Zero [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 08, 2003 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hello Peoples it is I Dark Zero. Yes I know it's kind of weak to write reviews for my own stories but no one else will! I write a review for every story I've ever read on this great site. So do the same for me. I'll take anything, Except viruses. ^-^ - Dark Zero

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