| "TK's Double Date - The Trilogy" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rurou On: December 12, 2004 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done, R80. A true master of the hentai art. I found this fic to be quite a treat. Though there some things I found quite... unorthodoxed as I read, but all in all, a job well done. Keep up the work. And never be afraid to express more than what you have. Be creative. I look forward to seeing more of your work. Adeu, for now...
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Title: great
Reviewed By: redhawk7 On: October 04, 2004 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is great stuff, you cant stop making these you have real talent, also you could do 2 guys 1 girl. what do ya say. but who am i to question sych a great writer.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: redhawk7 On: October 04, 2004 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is great stuff, you cant stop making these you have real talent, also you could do 2 guys 1 girl. what do ya say. but who am i to question sych a great writer.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: redhawk7 On: October 04, 2004 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is great stuff, you cant stop making these you have real talent, also you could do 2 guys 1 girl. what do ya say. but who am i to question sych a great writer.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: redhawk7 On: October 04, 2004 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is great stuff, you cant stop making these you have real talent, also you could do 2 guys 1 girl. what do ya say. but who am i to question sych a great writer.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: redhawk7 On: October 04, 2004 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is great stuff, you cant stop making these you have real talent, also you could do 2 guys 1 girl. what do ya say. but who am i to question sych a great writer.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: redhawk7 On: October 04, 2004 23:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey this is great stuff, you cant stop making these you have real talent, also you could do 2 guys 1 girl. what do ya say. but who am i to question sych a great writer.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: redhawk7 On: October 04, 2004 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is great stuff, you cant stop making these you have real talent, also you could do 2 guys 1 girl. what do ya say. but who am i to question sych a great writer.
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Reviewed By: X On: December 22, 2003 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! How about you write new fics with new combinations and new girls like Jun or Miyako. Here goes a suggestion of combinations with some ideas to help you writing: Jun/Takeru/Sora - After having theirs hearts broken by Yamato, both Sora and Jun seek in Takeru a little of "comfort". Hikari/Takeru/Miyako - Miyako realises that she is bisexual and that she is in love for her friend Hikari. When she tells that to her boyfriend Ken, he dump her. Miyako seeks Hikari for comfort, but end ups confessing her love. To her surprise, Hikari confess that she feel the same about her but she is also in love for someone else: her boyfriend Takeru. When they told Takeru about theirs feelings, he says that he is OK with it and that Hikari could be both his and Miyako's girlfriend at the same time, and so it happens. But, with the time Miyako also fell in love for Takeru. Miyako/Takeru/Mimi - Mimi comes back from the USA and the first thing that she does is go shopping with Miyako. Takeru end ups going along to keep company to them. In the end of the day, both Mimi and Miyako thanks Takeru in a very special way.
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Reviewed By: Sukooru On: October 23, 2003 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
An excellent fic. Come on Rob. Don't stop, keep em coming. Seriously I'm on my knees begging. Don't let me down. Update! Update! Update!
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Reviewed By: fgubatan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
robster, u da man!!! keep up da work!!! |
Reviewed By: LiL MysTic DraG0n [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 21:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
looks like i'm gonna beg... |
Reviewed By: linkin park On: May 26, 2003 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
off da hook
this was great
please write more fiction ur a great writer |
Reviewed By: sup On: May 26, 2003 03:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay this awesome write more tks the man |
Reviewed By: hope On: May 26, 2003 03:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
yo u gotta write more fics plz |
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