| "TK's Double Date - The Trilogy" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Title: great
Reviewed By: redhawk7 On: October 04, 2004 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is great stuff, you cant stop making these you have real talent, also you could do 2 guys 1 girl. what do ya say. but who am i to question sych a great writer.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: redhawk7 On: October 04, 2004 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is great stuff, you cant stop making these you have real talent, also you could do 2 guys 1 girl. what do ya say. but who am i to question sych a great writer.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: redhawk7 On: October 04, 2004 23:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey this is great stuff, you cant stop making these you have real talent, also you could do 2 guys 1 girl. what do ya say. but who am i to question sych a great writer.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: redhawk7 On: October 04, 2004 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is great stuff, you cant stop making these you have real talent, also you could do 2 guys 1 girl. what do ya say. but who am i to question sych a great writer.
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Reviewed By: X On: December 22, 2003 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! How about you write new fics with new combinations and new girls like Jun or Miyako. Here goes a suggestion of combinations with some ideas to help you writing: Jun/Takeru/Sora - After having theirs hearts broken by Yamato, both Sora and Jun seek in Takeru a little of "comfort". Hikari/Takeru/Miyako - Miyako realises that she is bisexual and that she is in love for her friend Hikari. When she tells that to her boyfriend Ken, he dump her. Miyako seeks Hikari for comfort, but end ups confessing her love. To her surprise, Hikari confess that she feel the same about her but she is also in love for someone else: her boyfriend Takeru. When they told Takeru about theirs feelings, he says that he is OK with it and that Hikari could be both his and Miyako's girlfriend at the same time, and so it happens. But, with the time Miyako also fell in love for Takeru. Miyako/Takeru/Mimi - Mimi comes back from the USA and the first thing that she does is go shopping with Miyako. Takeru end ups going along to keep company to them. In the end of the day, both Mimi and Miyako thanks Takeru in a very special way.
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Reviewed By: Sukooru On: October 23, 2003 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
An excellent fic. Come on Rob. Don't stop, keep em coming. Seriously I'm on my knees begging. Don't let me down. Update! Update! Update!
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Reviewed By: fgubatan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
robster, u da man!!! keep up da work!!! |
Reviewed By: LiL MysTic DraG0n [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 21:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
looks like i'm gonna beg... |
Reviewed By: linkin park On: May 26, 2003 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
off da hook
this was great
please write more fiction ur a great writer |
Reviewed By: sup On: May 26, 2003 03:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay this awesome write more tks the man |
Reviewed By: hope On: May 26, 2003 03:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
yo u gotta write more fics plz |
Reviewed By: rohan On: April 15, 2003 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fic . i think i'm gonig to enjoy ur next 1. |
Reviewed By: rohan On: April 14, 2003 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOOOTTTTTTTTT. it'd be great if u made another 1. |
Reviewed By: jareth leonine 1 On: April 08, 2003 21:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
you wrote Tai as a pussy who get's cuckolded for a kid several years younger than him?
Dude that is not cool. |
Reviewed By: SSSra On: April 08, 2003 04:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey r80 haven`t seen you post any new stories on digiartistsdomain in awhile hope to see you posting new stories either there or here soon |
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