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Reviewed By: Ten-tenshi On: February 27, 2005 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOO!!! You CAN NOT end there! Great fanfic, but please please please continue!!
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Reviewed By: flygirl 13 (not signed in) On: June 13, 2004 23:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
good job but you are sooo not finished what will happen to li clan what about kero and the earthquakes plz plz plz you have to continue plz update it
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Reviewed By: Lord Obsidian [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2003 22:46 CST
Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say I that i liked your story, and hope to (Insert choice of deity) that you write more like it. |
Reviewed By: Cy On: May 08, 2002 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come On, you can't say that it is finished!
No No No you would have to tell what happens next you can't just leave the readers hanging it is just not fair, So to me You are NOT finished So PLEASE can you write a better ending PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: bitch On: April 26, 2002 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
i didnt like the end u were sopose to makr it a happy ending |
Reviewed By: chibi honey bee On: February 11, 2002 06:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story...keep it up. please get the next chapters up soon! ja ne |
Reviewed By: the limited one [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2002 19:58 CST
Comment/Review:
doing great keeeep it up |
Reviewed By: digi_clow On: January 25, 2002 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story. please keep writing and keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Fan Fic Reader On: January 24, 2002 11:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fan fic and I hope you continue with it. Oh and I was wondering where it's at on ff.n hehe cause I can't seem to find it. Great Story :) |
Reviewed By: mitsubachi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2002 05:36 CST
Comment/Review:
i'm guessing that you people still don't believe it's actually me writing these chapters and not some imposter...here's what i'll do...in my story kura-kura i'll tell you that it's me who is posting on mediaminer. i can't exactly hack into someone's account just to post a chapter...plus the chapter one is already posted there. chapter two will be called dont let him go. please visit ff.n to make sure it actually is me here!! oh and i appreciate the tens you've all been giving me...it encourages me to write more. |
Reviewed By: -_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_- On: January 19, 2002 10:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue |
Reviewed By: yes_i_have_rice On: January 18, 2002 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wuddup, just stoppin' by ure story, read it, and itz tite like *bleepA*, keep up the work, me can't wait for ure nex one, but take ure time though ^-^ |
Reviewed By: _______________o____ On: January 18, 2002 13:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All these 10's don't belong to you. They belong to blue eyed angel. I can't believe you. Blue eyed angle deserves 10's not you. So you know what I'm gonna do, My sister works here, I'll tell her all about your copying a great book. And they won't let you write here again. So I suggest you
A. Delete the story.
B. Change the story.
C. Change the ending.
Whatever you are going to do, do it fast. |
Reviewed By: _____________________ On: January 13, 2002 11:14 CST
Comment/Review:
please continue or else ill do something really
really bad. |
Reviewed By: the author On: January 10, 2002 06:40 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just so you guys all know this really is my story and i am blue-eyed angel on ff.n...i just changed my name here...hehheh. |
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