"the return" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: chibi honey bee On: February 11, 2002 06:30 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: good story...keep it up. please get the next chapters up soon! ja ne |
Reviewed By: the limited one [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2002 19:58 CST Comment/Review: doing great keeeep it up |
Reviewed By: digi_clow On: January 25, 2002 21:00 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: great story. please keep writing and keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Fan Fic Reader On: January 24, 2002 11:15 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is a really good fan fic and I hope you continue with it. Oh and I was wondering where it's at on ff.n hehe cause I can't seem to find it. Great Story :) |
Reviewed By: mitsubachi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2002 05:36 CST Comment/Review: i'm guessing that you people still don't believe it's actually me writing these chapters and not some imposter...here's what i'll do...in my story kura-kura i'll tell you that it's me who is posting on mediaminer. i can't exactly hack into someone's account just to post a chapter...plus the chapter one is already posted there. chapter two will be called dont let him go. please visit ff.n to make sure it actually is me here!! oh and i appreciate the tens you've all been giving me...it encourages me to write more. |
Reviewed By: -_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_- On: January 19, 2002 10:51 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: please continue |
Reviewed By: yes_i_have_rice On: January 18, 2002 19:46 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: wuddup, just stoppin' by ure story, read it, and itz tite like *bleepA*, keep up the work, me can't wait for ure nex one, but take ure time though ^-^ |
Reviewed By: _______________o____ On: January 18, 2002 13:07 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: All these 10's don't belong to you. They belong to blue eyed angel. I can't believe you. Blue eyed angle deserves 10's not you. So you know what I'm gonna do, My sister works here, I'll tell her all about your copying a great book. And they won't let you write here again. So I suggest you
A. Delete the story.
B. Change the story.
C. Change the ending.
Whatever you are going to do, do it fast. |
Reviewed By: _____________________ On: January 13, 2002 11:14 CST Comment/Review: please continue or else ill do something really
really bad. |
Reviewed By: the author On: January 10, 2002 06:40 CST Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: just so you guys all know this really is my story and i am blue-eyed angel on ff.n...i just changed my name here...hehheh. |
Reviewed By: someone who's curious On: January 07, 2002 18:25 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review: I was just wondering if this is a fic from ff.net then how come it is exactly the same as 'the return' from blue eyed angel? huh, just wondering since its EXACTLY THE SAME AND SHE WROTE A SEQUEL AS WELL hmm...well if this REALLY IS your fic then how come ur only on chapter 4 when she finished already...as well as chapter 6 of her sequel well delete this review if you want but I think its just plain unfair and I'll continue to do this even is you delete it!
From another author who's shocked and the copy |
Reviewed By: Princess_Cattleya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2002 18:07 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This fic definitely needs 2 b finished! I LUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUV it sooooooo much! I've read practically all the fics that has been read, but this is one of the best!!! Top of my top 10 greatest fanfic list! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!! Don't 4get 2 update it soon |
Reviewed By: AnimeGRL On: January 02, 2002 22:27 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: wow! i really liked this fan fic please finish it soon! i cant wait!!! |
Reviewed By: cool On: December 27, 2001 08:22 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: oh cmon why did u stop there.pls. continue |
Reviewed By: ~BabySmurf~ On: November 23, 2001 21:36 CST Comment/Review: Hey- gotta say I love this story! it's written very interesting-ly((is that even a word?)) and I wanna read the rest -- assuming you're not gonna continue posting here(you haven't been on for like 3weeks) I'll just read it on ff.n
anyway--Good job! |
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