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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 01:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great story. Sad overall but great.. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: guardian angel On: December 07, 2003 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was the best most interesting story I have ever read. It made me cry ( poor Sesshy ) I wish kagome didnt have to die though. I mean she made my Sesshy happy ( hes not really mine but oh well ) Thanks so much for wrigting that story ( it was the best i have ever read) keep up the mondo kewlio work
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a lovely story im sorry that i didnt notice the story until now or i would have reviewed more up writing good stories bye
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: November 14, 2003 15:32 CST
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Waahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! *crying* That is *sniffle* evil! How *sniffle*could you kill kagome? Are you going to bring Sessy/Kag together again? Update!
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Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic!! Love it! Update SSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!
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Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 15:37 CST
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You evil author! YOu hurt shippou! How dare you! Hurting him and Rin is the wost thing to do in my opinion! Update Soon! Hasta Luego!
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: October 31, 2003 15:04 CST
Comment/Review:
No!! . . . . . . .Not Shippou-chan, please up date soon!! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . OH.. and good luck with getting away from your sister . . . I got one too.. but my problem is not with her but my little brother instead .. . . . that bloody 11 years old is a monkey -_-;;;;
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Reviewed By: Suaru-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Awesome job on this fic! It's one of the best I've read! I love the way you've portrayed the characters and your idea is very original! I've only seen a few errors but that's ok; it's still a kick ass fic! Haru seems cool; you gonna give him a mate? I couldn't stop reading this, and I can't wait till you update again. I wish you luck with this fic and all other fics you've written or have yet to write. You're a great author and very creative. Also, do you need a beta-reader? Just asking, not meant to be offensive or anything; I swear! *looks around for a laptop to suddenly come at her head* Anyhow, good job and good luck. I hope that you have fun writing the rest of the fic and that you get many reviews. Later, Jade (Suaru-chan, author of Together Forever)
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Reviewed By: Blue cresent moon On: October 28, 2003 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOOOOOON K
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good cant wait for you to update i really liked the idea of having sango and kagome be sisters it added a sort of flare to the story.
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Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 14:00 CST
Comment/Review:
I also read the story and loved it. Sundragon special is just my best friend who is like a sister. Update already! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Hasta!
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Reviewed By: sundragon special On: October 26, 2003 13:55 CST
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Please update. I love the story. I know how sisters can be. My sister sundragon is such a pain. *Hears SD walking down hall* GTG! Ja Ne.
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Reviewed By: *~PrincessKagome~* On: October 26, 2003 01:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE I LOVE IT AND U MUST UPDATE OR I WILL HUNT U DOWN AND KILL U!!!!!!! so prtty plzzz update *smiles innocently*
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Reviewed By: Chibi-Sesshou On: October 25, 2003 20:32 CDT
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Well what are you waiting for woman?! Update the next chapter! I want to be born you know? Don't make Kagome-kaasan waited for too long please. I want to torment my Dad
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Title: Sniff, sniff
Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: October 25, 2003 20:27 CDT
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That was cruel . . . . . . . I really love this fic . . . . . . Please don't make us readers waited for too long . . . . Please!!
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