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Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 15:37 CST
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You evil author! YOu hurt shippou! How dare you! Hurting him and Rin is the wost thing to do in my opinion! Update Soon! Hasta Luego!
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: October 31, 2003 15:04 CST
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No!! . . . . . . .Not Shippou-chan, please up date soon!! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . OH.. and good luck with getting away from your sister . . . I got one too.. but my problem is not with her but my little brother instead .. . . . that bloody 11 years old is a monkey -_-;;;;
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Reviewed By: Suaru-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Awesome job on this fic! It's one of the best I've read! I love the way you've portrayed the characters and your idea is very original! I've only seen a few errors but that's ok; it's still a kick ass fic! Haru seems cool; you gonna give him a mate? I couldn't stop reading this, and I can't wait till you update again. I wish you luck with this fic and all other fics you've written or have yet to write. You're a great author and very creative. Also, do you need a beta-reader? Just asking, not meant to be offensive or anything; I swear! *looks around for a laptop to suddenly come at her head* Anyhow, good job and good luck. I hope that you have fun writing the rest of the fic and that you get many reviews. Later, Jade (Suaru-chan, author of Together Forever)
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Reviewed By: Blue cresent moon On: October 28, 2003 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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UPDATE SOOOOOON K
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good cant wait for you to update i really liked the idea of having sango and kagome be sisters it added a sort of flare to the story.
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Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 14:00 CST
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I also read the story and loved it. Sundragon special is just my best friend who is like a sister. Update already! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Hasta!
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Reviewed By: sundragon special On: October 26, 2003 13:55 CST
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Please update. I love the story. I know how sisters can be. My sister sundragon is such a pain. *Hears SD walking down hall* GTG! Ja Ne.
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Reviewed By: *~PrincessKagome~* On: October 26, 2003 01:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE I LOVE IT AND U MUST UPDATE OR I WILL HUNT U DOWN AND KILL U!!!!!!! so prtty plzzz update *smiles innocently*
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Reviewed By: Chibi-Sesshou On: October 25, 2003 20:32 CDT
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Well what are you waiting for woman?! Update the next chapter! I want to be born you know? Don't make Kagome-kaasan waited for too long please. I want to torment my Dad
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Title: Sniff, sniff
Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: October 25, 2003 20:27 CDT
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That was cruel . . . . . . . I really love this fic . . . . . . Please don't make us readers waited for too long . . . . Please!!
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Reviewed By: DemonQueen17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 19:00 CDT
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I like this story even more. Yay, Makoto's dead. I never liked him anyway. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: October 22, 2003 22:06 CDT
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Oh!! I'm glad you have update this fic! . . . . It's good! Now hope that writer block will stay away for a long while! . . . . Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: adorable akane On: September 06, 2003 03:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE the Laptop of Doom!! But why did you make Kagome and Sango so heartless?? Anyway please update very soon k? Domo, Ja Mata. |
Reviewed By: kirara97 On: July 28, 2003 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutely luv it! great and super cool. you add your own style to it the grammer aint that good but who cares. please review soon! |
Reviewed By: DemonQueen17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 12:34 CDT
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Yep, it's me again. I guess Inuyasha isn't so stupid after all. This story gets better with every chapter. Keep up the good work. Update soon. |
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