| "Breathe" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Maho Tenshi On: September 10, 2003 16:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great PWP, really liked it, you did a wonderfull Trunks POV. Go you ^^ keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 04:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nicely romantic with a taunting edge of possible despair. |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, Trunks loves Goten so much. And just to think, and actual son of Vegeta, *V-E-G-E-T-A*... could have such strong feelings of love for somebody. I wanted to cry, yet damn the fact I don't get emotional too often. Because if I did, my computer monitor would be floating in a sea of my own tears right now. This fic was extrodinary, treasure it always, because I sure as HFIL will. |
Reviewed By: Sean On: April 14, 2003 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
though the theme was not exactly to my taistes, i did how ever find the emotion behind it amazing. deep and strong yea those words fit the emotion. didnt know what to expect but it was good |
Reviewed By: zetto On: April 09, 2003 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I prefer angst, but this one was too good eventhough it was sappy.Keep up!Trunks/Goten rulez. |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wah! Incredibly written, peppered with endearing turns of phrases, thoroughly memorable & truly erotic. Well done says I! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn it I loved it !!!!! U RULLLE!!!!!!!!!!!! Im getting inspired now !!!!!!!!! HEHEHEHEH!
U outdone yourself everytime I love the fic! keep them coming now I love yaoi!!!
Its truEE!!
Later!!!! |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~heavy sigh~ That's the third time I've read this since you sent it to me this morning, and it made me cry all three times!! It's just so beautiful!! First person is SO hard to write in (in my opinion, at least!) and you have done it SO wonderfully! It's so descriptive, and so sweet and so romantic!
You've always told me that you couldn't write romance...well, you have just proven yourself wrong, kiddiepoo! This is one of the most romantic Trutens I've ever read, and to get across the depth of emotion that you have in just a few short pages, that's pretty impressive!
The fact that you wrote it FOR ME is such a huge honor, I can't even tell you!! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!! ~glomps the living HFIL out of SM~ |
Reviewed By: Shastania [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 09:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
SaintMe, my dear! You're turning me into a Truten lover! *gasps from the audiance*
I loved that! It was so sexiful! *tuhumbs up* |
