| "Future, a glimmer of Hope" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Dangerous_angels On: May 29, 2003 12:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh la la It's me again, your friendly review at your service! :) Anyway great story! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! |
Reviewed By: The G Kyia On: April 22, 2003 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave this fanfic a 10 because it was just a great fic to read. I love having my favorite female in Dragonball Gt put in between a Trunks of her timeline and another one. I love romance fics dealing with the two of them because I think that they are great together. Good Plot also/ |
Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story, it's really great!
Thank you very much for the review on my story, it was nice of you to drop it by.
I'm really hoping for you to update soon, cause this is pretty interesting... I mean... to beautiful men in one house, what more could a teenaged girl want?
-kinoko |
Reviewed By: Lisa On: April 11, 2003 23:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
You just need to write more.......
Okay, maybe work on the story line. |
