| "He walks in beauty..." Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 00:58 CST
Comment/Review:
This fanfic wasn't what I expected. Actually, I don't know what I expected. Usually, I'm not into... Shota fanfics -- as I now know they are called. I'd more likely read fics with threesomes involving brothers. (I want to write one with Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha) But a fic with Van AND Folken... (Yeah, Allen's great too) I couldn't resist at least PEAKing. ;) I loved the sensitivity of the wing spots. Kind of like the spot where Vegeta's tail used to be. But the ending with the wings... it made the fic worth it. In fact, you may have inspired me to write an Escaflowne fanfiction one day... I liked that you toned down the lustful side and made it sweeter. Nice work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Cor Cor On: January 23, 2004 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. everyone thinks folken is evil, but not you yay. more more more.
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Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad. its really cute the way you made van, and the wings was a cool idea. never thought about that b4... though i dont normaly read escaflowne stuff. van is just soooo damn adorable here. maybe ill read more...
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Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad. its really cute the way you made van, and the wings was a cool idea. never thought about that b4... though i dont normaly read escaflowne stuff. van is just soooo damn adorable here. maybe ill read more... |
Reviewed By: Katsu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! A fanfic about my favorite Shota pairing!! I really loved this!! The way Van is calling Folken "Niichan" is so utterly cute. You should wirte weven more shota fanfics! Really..there can't be enough of them outthere. I would galddly added the ficcie to my page, if you could send it to me in html format. ^o^ Keep up the good work, I am really egear to read more fics from you. |
