| "Sephiroth's Demands" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Anime_Angel88 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story itself is really great, but would it kill you to run a spell check? I saw over a hundred mistakes in the first chaper alone. But still, it's a great story, and I hope you'll write more of it. -Q
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Reviewed By: Nayna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i like your fanfic and i would be very happy if you continue... |
Reviewed By: RPG er On: April 12, 2003 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should really warn people to get ready for some serious Aeris bashing.....Don't get me wrong I like this fanfic, it's another viewpoint, but good all the same. |
Reviewed By: Sasara On: April 10, 2003 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
The style of this story is very unique. From all of the ff7 stories I have read, I don't think I have read anything concerning the trip with Zack and Sephiroth first coming to Tifas hometown. I do have one gripe about the story. Please please please fix the spelling/grammar mistakes that are in the story. Maybe find someone to be a beta reader for you to help catch the mistakes. Other than the previous mentioned stuff, I am actually looking forward to the next chapter to this one. |
