"Sephiroth's Demands" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: shadowkado Reviewed By: evilflynmonkeys [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 01:42 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: oh my god! this story is the best story I've ever read! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE VERY SOON!
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Reviewed By: Elf From Space On: November 16, 2003 00:24 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10 Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review: PLEASE run a spell checker!! No matter what some people try to say, spelling is important. When you can't spell and you've got so many grammar errors it's really hard to read and people can't enjoy the story. Otherwise it seemed like it might have been good.
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Reviewed By: kk On: November 05, 2003 18:55 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10 Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: You need to fix your spelling and gramtical errors. Pretty good plot but with all the mistakes it's not fun to read.
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Reviewed By: blcrane52 On: July 23, 2003 01:09 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10 Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: With all the spelling errors, I could hardly understand this, and it really took away from the enjoyment. Maybe if you spell-check this story and take out all the funky symbols, I could give this a better rating. |
Reviewed By: Sk8s [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 03:04 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: It's really great, i'd love for you to continue. Please do. I don't mind the mistakes...just please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Yokai Hansha On: July 06, 2003 23:32 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: This was good, but right more plz! I love Sephiroth and Tifa pairings! |
Reviewed By: Ana On: June 30, 2003 19:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10 Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: Dude... This would be such a good story if you would learn how to fucking spell! Is Englis not your native language? That is the only reason I can see for this being so bad grammically! Get you an editor. Unless you just don't fucking care that it takes some one twice as long to read your fanfiction because they have to figure out what you're saying. Do us all a favor and fix this shit! The plot line is good. But hell fire girl! Run a spell check before you post! |
Reviewed By: Nayna On: April 25, 2003 11:00 CDT Comment/Review: I NEED MORE STUFF, KEEP ON WRITING!!!^^ |
Reviewed By: kayla On: April 22, 2003 11:56 CDT Comment/Review: WRITE MORE!!! I love it |
Reviewed By: wewe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2003 08:55 CDT Comment/Review: This is really good!!!!
Can't wait to see next chapter!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Nayna On: April 09, 2003 08:56 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: your fic is a really good one...please continue ^^ |