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Title: YOWZAA
Reviewed By: InuyashasLoverTigerLily [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story and please update. i cried when shippo died...why did you kill him?? and where's Kirara??
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Reviewed By: Relix On: January 04, 2004 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, so funny... yet sad, poor shippo.. a good fic. A very good fic.
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Reviewed By: Mei On: June 07, 2003 03:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A really good 'Kagome changes into ???' fic. But the second Shippo should have been the first Shippo's reincarnation, born with red hair and birthmarks where he had been injured. That would have made the ending 20 times better!!!! |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*laughs* Ok, so you didn't allow Sesshoumaru to be as Slow as Inu-chan was! *tilts head* But why didn't Inuyasha start ribbing back about Rin?? She's going to be of age sooner than any of the twins? *grins* Make Sess-sama sweat even more! *laughs* |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 11:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
*laughs* What is it about the Inu Brothers that they can never admitt their feelings for the one they care most for?? *shakes head* Nice pairing for them all! But I thought you might have named the girl 'Kaede'? Since they named their boy after Shippo? Oh well, nice name choice! |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 11:34 CDT
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Awww such fluffy goodness. Nice way to unwind after everything. So who will you choose for Miroku to be married to?? I'm really curious! |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 11:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
*Blinks* Gadz you had me sooo into this battle scene that my roomie had to come in and see what I was yelling about! *laughs*
Well his prediction came true....*sighs*. But now they can continue without any more threats. Cool form you gave Kagome!! Was it partly because of the Jewel that she did that? Inuyasha dosen't have such a form. |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 11:06 CDT
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*blinks* Ye Gads the battle is about to start! Can't wait to see how it all turns out and hope that 'feeling' is wrong! |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 10:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
*winces* You just HAD to re-include that Hag Kikyou didn't you? Oh well. But I'm glad that Kouga has a very good idea on what to expect during Sango's pregnacy when she is.
So one has a preminitional feeling that one will be gone?? Awww man not again! Hey! Who is Miroku going to 'hook up' with anyway?? Kagura? *laughs* |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 10:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
*Chuckles* Oh I loved the little quips in each of the POV's in this ch. Especially Inu's on how 'tempramental' Kag could possibly be! Oh he's going to find out the Hard Way!! Kouga should pay very close attention as well! 'Specially if he wishes Sango to go through it! *laughs* |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 10:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I don't know if I reviewed this chapter or not sooo bear with me. *grins*
That is soooo cool that Kag is expecting! Not the greatest of timing but hey, some things happen on their own time! *laughs* |
Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the lust bunnies are getting it on like nobody's business. but why did you kill poor shippo?!?! ::sniff:: update soon, i wanna read when kagome kicks butt cuz her 'son' got killed. ja ne! |
Reviewed By: silverbutterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"sniff sniff" I loved your story...I was sad about Shippo, but I think the whole story is nice. Update soon...I wanna know what happens..:) |
Reviewed By: evilwriter [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 21:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok ok i've reread my story and i know it kinda sux but it's my first one. i guess i've seen worse. please r&r the as nicely as you can. do it for my ego,PLEASE!!!, it can't take much more bruising from myself beating my head in the wall after rereading this story of mine. ALL I WANTED WAS TO GET OFF! i love lemons. *sigh*
well bye bye y'all |
Reviewed By: Paws On: April 09, 2003 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*crys* Why did you do that to Shippo!?? Couldn't Sesshoumaru revive him??? Cruel I tell you that's plain cruel! Oh does Miroku know of Kouga's plans to 'court' Sango? |
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