| "Children of Power" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Snale On: October 23, 2003 18:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
'lo, itsa good start even though Dilandau's kinda "tame". Story's potential to grow and become great is large - so do a good job, ok? liking it very much...
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Reviewed By: Eternity-san [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 12:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi me again. Just read the second chapter. I've read your notes,and although I agree with it being alternate and all that, I think a little "demented" behaviour from Dilandou would make him seem like the Dilandou in the series. But I do like this "other" Dilly. This isn't inteded to offened or anything, but I like your blunt/frank style. I'll be watching for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Eternity-san [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. The way you've written the first chapter captures the mood entirely. Eries is also portayed perfectly. Is this going to be a love story? I'm a sucker for romantic stories. ^_^ |
