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Reviewed By: Tsubaki On: June 15, 2004 21:01 CDT
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I know compliments like "This is the greatest fic EVAR" are thrown around a dozen a dime around here, but I really do think that this is the best RK AU fic I've seen. I just started reading today and couldn't stop until the ;ast chapter... and read it all over again. Kudos.
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Reviewed By: WOW [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually printed this chapter out...I was awe stricken at how well it was written. I guess I was really lucky at how I had just finished reading it and then a few days later there was an update..WONDERFUL..absolutely WONDERFUL!
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Reviewed By: hellno kitty On: June 12, 2004 10:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hideki, you dirty bastard!!! At least get revenge in an honorable way! >:( And yeah, thanks for treating mental illness so realistically. I've seen people with mental illness and it aint pretty. They and practically everyone else around them suffer, like they are in the story.
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Title: Whoa
Reviewed By: Demoness_Smut [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took me hours to read this...God it was soo good. I can't believe Kenshin has gone crazy again. This is the climax to the story. I couldn't eat because I felt that I would get sick from all the crying I was doing. I haven't found this moving a fiction in the K and K world for a long time...Now that I've come across someone like yourself I can't wait till you update. This fiction is well worth the read. With chapters that long I could care less how long it takes you to update. Just as long as you update this beautifully written story.
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Reviewed By: blue dahlia On: April 26, 2004 07:45 CDT
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hey. just wanted you to know, even after 11 chapters i'm as impressed by your originality as i was at the beginning. this is good stuff!
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Reviewed By: Sweet cardboard On: April 15, 2004 22:26 CDT
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I thought Sen said Soujiro was a psychiatrist in the last chapter? Or was she just fooled by Shishio? Anyway, I love reading about the Kyoto arc in a new light. None of the lukewarm reheated mush of some of the AU fics here, nope. I'm also wondering if Kenshin and Kaoru's relationship can survive after this. Realistically and logically, I'd say no, but I'm a sucker for K&K and hope they can somehow stay together through this.
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Reviewed By: Pocket pack of tissues On: April 14, 2004 07:00 CDT
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I know I've already reviewed your fic and that mm.org doesn't encourage reviewing each chapter but I just can't resist reviewing again - it's just that great. *gets paper bag to control hyper breathing* I really want to congratulate you on doing such a good job with these last three chapters. The scenes where Kenshin's drugged and captured were especially powerful, and I physically cringed at the loss of his dignity - and the people above who are determined to use him right up to the day he dies. Kaoru's reaction is also very believable. I assume you're keeping the manga ages for the characters so her state of mind as a 17-yr-old girl and as the Kaoru we know from the series totally worked for me before, during and after Kenshin's absence. Oh boy, I just realized that means Kenshin can land in jail since Kaoru's jailbait (if that law's in Japan too). LOL! There are still some minor spelling mistakes, like not having a space between two separate words (eg "MissKamiya") but that may just be a html thing, and the spelling/grammar errors weren't large enough to distract me from the flow of the fic. This is definately the best multi-chapter AU RK fic I've read so far, and one of the best fics I've read per se - no question about it.
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Title: continued...
Reviewed By: ichigo_drops On: April 12, 2004 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry, the rest of my review didn't come out... this is one of the best fanfics i've ever read, because for once there is an original idea for a plot. (thank you thank you thank you) the characters all have an incredible amount of depth in them, and i think it was wonderful how you portrayed everyone the way they should be. Another thing i have to thank you for is that you didn't make kaoru seem like a weak person who's entirely dependent on kenshin, unlike some other...umm...fanfictions. She's her own person. She can deal with it. but it was touching to see that she went after him and that she and yahiko are going to wait until kenshin is better :) I also liked Battousai's personality in this fanfic. While other fanfics like to make him seem a bit softer, this battousai is a bit more like how i imagined him, just raw, animalistic feelings. (well, pretty much so far, anyway) I think you're a very talented writer, so please update soon and keep it up!
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Reviewed By: ichigo_drops On: April 12, 2004 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0_o I LOVE THIS FANFICTION! have been sittting here for two hours straight and finished all the current chapters...the status says that it is complete...that's not true, right? i hope kenshin will find a way to get back to kaoru -_-...i'll be so sad if they don't...darn, you and your cliffies >_
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Reviewed By: driven by insanity On: April 07, 2004 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really loved it, it caught my eyes the whole way it was all played out when i saw the title of the story i was in a hurry to read it already. i love the way keshin struggled though thinking he's unworthy of everything just like kenshin and sano just as the thug he is i hate megumi but she seems okay in the story those people wouldn't just leave them in peace and damn these people made love like dogs ha hope there will be morw and fighting scenes until next time
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Title: Whoo-hoo-hooooooo!!!!!
Reviewed By: Battousais gal[not logged on] On: March 28, 2004 14:12 CST
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Wai! You've updated! I'm so happy! ^_^ As always, it was great! I cannot wait for the next chapter/s! Ja ne! Tanya
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Reviewed By: pinata candy On: March 26, 2004 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why bother with the other ratings? ;) Despite a few mistakes in spelling and such, this is such a great fic. I can't believe I've been missing out on your story all this time by only going to ff.net! Please keep writing this fic - mm.org and ff.net have so many awful RK fics written by immature kids that fics like yours is a breath of fresh air.
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Reviewed By: Jenny from the Block (too damn lazy to log in) On: February 06, 2004 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Violet Eyes: Wow! I love Rurouni Kenshin, and normally I don't read these types of fics, but something about yours caught my eye and I'm in so much suspense, I hope you continue it! Kuribo-kun: Yeah, I really like the way you don't just make it like any other, its different, and the way you describe whats going on inside Kenshin's head, I can't help but feel sorry for the baka- Violet Eyes: Hey! He is not a baka! Kuribo-kun: Alright. Well, your writing style is really impressive, and I just really hope you continue with it...right Kenshin? Kenshin: `sour look` everyone's picking on me... Saito: Too damn right. But what the heck is a baseball cap? Violet Eyes: Its a hat Saito: right...I knew that Sano:Whats wrong with Weasel girl? She's drooling over that baka Aoshi-ARGH!!! Misao: Techo Kick! `kicks Sano` Aoshi: ... Hiko: I seriously need more sake
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Reviewed By: mistletoe On: January 04, 2004 21:51 CST
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this is very cool. i wonder what kenshin would be like as battousai in front of kaoru, will he kill her? plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: Pockypocky On: December 15, 2003 21:28 CST
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I love the way Kenshin is in here! I normally hate Megumi and Kaoru, but I like them a lot in this story. Plz update!
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