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| "Four on the floor" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: GreenEyes On: April 10, 2003 22:28 EDT
Comment/Review:
*applauds*
O_O I need ice water now!! I LOVED it! Great job!!
Oooh sooo lemony....*drools* | Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 20:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was one of the hottest yaoi group things I have ever read .Very well written and very very EROTIC!
Yumm!!!!!
Keep on writting! ok
Later!:) | Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 19:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has GOT TO BE the HOTTEST fic I have ever had the perverse pleasure of reading!! From the dirty dancing, all the way up to Goten's wicked final comment, the entire thing was so incredibly sexy!! Ok, maybe not when Goten ran to the bathroom, but still...
The individual pairs on the couch and in the hallway were absolutely DELICIOUS!! The mental picture I have of Tora and Trunks...GAH!! Those two are absolute perfection together. And I love the pairing of Gohan and Goten!! How sexy is THAT?
But the FOURSOME!! GAH!! I just LOVED how Tora took control, positioning all the bodies, and directing what should be happening! DAMN he's hot! The whole thing just blew me away! Excuse me while I go stand in front of the freezer to cool off!! | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
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