| "Four on the floor" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Brandon soto On: April 29, 2012 03:27 EDT
Comment/Review:
Bitch you better run if you see a axe maniac that will be me you should not of made incest and cross timeline selves have sex you creepy ass bitch warn about incest next time if there is a next time |
Title: SonSofia
Reviewed By: HOT DAMN! On: February 20, 2007 18:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So delicious and hot...it ought to be a crime. I found Gohan fucking Goten to be the hottest thing EVER! Oh man, what ever you've been doing to produce a story like this, do it more often, please by all means!
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Reviewed By: MrSbAnD [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 01:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY LORD!!!! that was HOT! god....i dont think i've laughed that much and found something that hot for a looooooooong time....i hope you write a sequel!!!!
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Reviewed By: PyroFlivver On: December 23, 2003 17:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!! LOVED THE GOHAN AND GOTEN ACTION AND THEN WITH TORA AND TRUNKS AND THEN ALL FOUR OF THEM!!!!!!!!!!!AAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!!!!! YEAH!!!!
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Reviewed By: I LUVV Vege On: November 10, 2003 18:02 EST
Comment/Review:
OMG! That was Sooooooo delicious!! WOOHOO! Great lemony action! You should SO make a sequel one-shot to this!! Ohhh yeah!!!
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Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 20:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo!!!!!!!! I just got done reading this at The Vault, but I had to review it here. OMFG, That was so fucking great. I can have this one too right? You should write more group sex, only have Veggie in it this time *drools in 50 buckets*
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Reviewed By: mizkittyuk@yahoo.com On: July 25, 2003 19:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!i could see it all in my mind....ooooh my lord how erotic!it was just oooooh,gohan and goten!brilliant idea and Tora and his chibi self..oooh brilliant too,omg,omg,omg,just...ooooh amazing!i loved it!PLLLEEAASEE WRITE MORE FOUR-SOMES WITH THEM CHARAS!PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE hehehehehehehehehehehehheheehehehehehehehehe,dont change one single damn fuckin thing about that story!if you do it will be a bloody crime!bwahahahahahahahahaha,me LOVED IT and it takes ALOT of good stuff to make me go THIS Hyper and damned happy an shaky an ect.LOOOL!iiiiiiiiiiiiiii LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT! |
Reviewed By: nikkigurl99 On: April 16, 2003 21:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic. Very dirty and all. But you should rephrase some of it. Smut is good, but it's better when the flow is smooth. No offense. Maybe I'm spoiled by Firecracker and Xe. Please don't hate me. |
Reviewed By: reader101 On: April 16, 2003 11:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The idea is interesting. But you depend on the shock value to carry my interest through the fic. That's too bad, because it had alot of potential. Maybe a more thorough beta reading would help. Honestly... it looks like something you slapped together in a few hours and ran a spell check through. |
Reviewed By: Piccolobond [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 16:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so delicious!SOOOO sexy and hot.Your a talent,keep writing!
LEMON........*drools*.......... |
Reviewed By: Konnioko On: April 13, 2003 14:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! There should be more of these!! So many more! Hint hint! That was fan-bloody-tastic! It doesn't come much hotter than that! (Excuse bad pun) Wow!! |
Reviewed By: Atrimis Legnacra On: April 12, 2003 18:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, I enjoyed it very much... my only problem is you have a typo... and i would have never pictured future trunks, tora you called him, returning just to make a lover out of his younger self and Gohan, since when he first met gohan, gohan was just barely a teen...
Semantics aside, great story. |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 21:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My mouth is opening and closing, making this strange popping sound... I'm completely dry... in my mouth, that is.
What a beautifully written, totally erotic, mind-numbing, fan-fucking-tastic fic, SSM! My kami, the way you wrote this, I could practically see everything that went on, and let me tell you, it was a b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l sight! :)
I need to get some icewater, as soon as my legs stop shaking... ;-) |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 10:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*ducks the objects whipped at her head from Raven, for not reviewing sooner*
That was absolutely DELICIOUS!! *licks lips* Hot damn... Who knew a demi four some could be that freaking SEXY!? er... well, I suppose it was a grand ole' idea, but to actually see it written out... oooh oooh oooooooh *whimper*
Me thinks your my hero for the day ^_^ This is gonna be stuck in my brain for the entire damn day... *wonders if her boss will send her home after she goes into a mad fit of giggles for no apparent reason*..... lol
write again soon!!! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 01:16 EDT
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-twitch twitch- Some leaps from reality - four people never cooperate flawlessly the first time together, it looks easier than it is - but it's more than granted for the abso-fucking-loutely fantastic descriptions.
Wow.
Quadruple wow, even. |
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