| "A New Beginning/ A New World: Emerald Edition" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: johnPhilippines On: March 06, 2009 09:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Few people have great ideas like you man. You know, i'mt not really in to anime not until i watched Evangelion. I was quite disappointed about the EndOfEvangelion movie coz it leaves a lot of hanging questions but later on i was able to understand it. This writing of yours would be a good continuation. I have'nt finished reading this entirely, i'm only at chapter 9 but it's really entertaining. Peace
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Title: Uh ST Pika
Reviewed By: RyoTheSaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2007 17:42 CST
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ST Pika all of new chapter is deleted heh I think you need re-upload!
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: Jarold On: August 13, 2007 09:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
St Pika your story is awesome. But in your newest chapter I noticed that there were some 'very' obviously spelling mistakes. Maybe you were in a rush? But you said the first pages you wrote during vacation on a train ride so maybe it was kinda bumpy. Nonetheless the story rocks continue on friend!
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Reviewed By: The War General [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 11:22 CDT
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This story is great please update soon.
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Reviewed By: NemesisBehemoth On: July 23, 2007 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It has been a real pleasure reading something so interesting specially these last chapters, grammar and spelling can take a back seat when you've got so many good ideas, and I look forwards future chapters. Awesome job!!
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Title: Chapter 38
Reviewed By: Ultima_1981 On: July 22, 2007 11:24 CDT
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Great Story so far. I'd like to read more of it. But there seems to be nothing in chapter 38: Chilly February. There's only your introductory paragraph, but nothing more. Could you please fix that?
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Title: DUDE NICE!!! :)
Reviewed By: [SxK] Engel On: June 21, 2007 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love all ur chap. man the're really good hopefully u post some more sooner though i can imagine how hard it is to work on a fan fic keep up the good work and congrats with the 4.0 and highest honors. one of the best fics i ever read.
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 08:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good chapter.
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 08:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good chapter.
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Title: keepem coming
Reviewed By: maurio85 On: July 07, 2006 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is great 3 days streat reading til 4 in da morning... but hey it was worth it. Sooo please continue this story soon so i can doit again please. I hope that in the next one you can get to the good stuff ya now about SEELE. Dont discourage keep it up
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Reviewed By: neverine On: June 22, 2006 08:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fic. please up date soon
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Reviewed By: neverine On: June 22, 2006 08:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fic. please up date soon
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Reviewed By: BML On: May 29, 2006 01:02 CDT
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I liked the story. It reminds me of the first half of the series. It isn't constantly depressing. It is quite entertaining to read.
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Reviewed By: Rahhel (not looged in) On: May 07, 2006 05:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a pretty neat story. I will definetly keep on reading this. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Fusion Blaster On: May 04, 2006 22:52 CDT
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Well that was pretty good. Love the scene in the KFC. That was som egood stuff. I also liked the Ken/Rei byplay in this one.
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