| "A New Beginning/ A New World: Emerald Edition" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: BML On: May 29, 2006 01:02 CDT
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I liked the story. It reminds me of the first half of the series. It isn't constantly depressing. It is quite entertaining to read.
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Reviewed By: Rahhel (not looged in) On: May 07, 2006 05:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a pretty neat story. I will definetly keep on reading this. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Fusion Blaster On: May 04, 2006 22:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well that was pretty good. Love the scene in the KFC. That was som egood stuff. I also liked the Ken/Rei byplay in this one.
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Reviewed By: Kuzy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man keep it up, and please finish it, I think I could keep rereading this story a 100 times and still be interested.
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Reviewed By: Procyon On: April 17, 2006 11:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it but get rid of the damn Script.
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Reviewed By: Fusion Blaster On: March 31, 2006 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well since I can't leave a review at FFRU I'll leave one here. A very interesring chapter and an evil EVIL cliffhanger. You really got me wanting to read the next chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: Gin-chan On: March 29, 2006 01:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was so good!!! Argh...And you just HAD to leave it hanging HERE!!! aiyaaaaaaa....I wasn't hanging off the edge of my seat, I would be if it didn't have armrests. I love this...Please update soon! And be prepared for my "Getting-you-of-your-ass-and-writing" cheers/demands/nags.
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Title: Nice so far...
Reviewed By: Cardcaptor_RLH85 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 02:08 CST
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I like this so far...with the exception of the script format. However, before you write this off as some kind of flame, I normally quit on script type fics after one chapter but, I like your story so much that I'm 'staying the course' ^_^ Keep up the good plot work ^_^
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Reviewed By: thrawn On: June 23, 2005 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great dtuff and imagination hope it continues let me now at mace6991@gmail.com
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Title: !!!
Reviewed By: elementalspirit125 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AIEEE!!! squeals in delight* You're here too! Hihi! *jumps around perkily*
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Reviewed By: LZ On: May 02, 2004 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very unique and intriguing story you have here. Plz continue.
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Reviewed By: L33tfic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good fic, but the movie style script is really wierd to read.
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Reviewed By: Kail Blade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 00:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, but this story just doesnt look right. The story-plot is good, even if it has been used repeatedly, but the writing style is Awful.
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Title: -_- zzzzzzz
Reviewed By: Mr. Foo On: September 08, 2003 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Average at best, I like A/S fics usually, but I got bored int the first page. I hate the movie script style you wrote it in. |
Reviewed By: Dan On: June 03, 2003 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. It has great potential. I cant wait till the next episode. Great A/S thing going on, It works this is the kind of thing i hoped the movie would be!!!keep up the good work |
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