| "Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: kitcat
Reviewed By: kitcatjenjen On: May 04, 2004 05:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story Ive never seen it here befor now please write some more stories I loved this one also I'm a big fan of vegeta and raditz
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Reviewed By: QueenSaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 08:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why didn't I see this fic here before? *kicks Mediaminer in the head*
*chokes on her own tongue* That was... AHEM. Thoroughly indecent, and very good. I was quite pleased by the absence of grammatical/spelling errors, because that's really something rare these days. ^_^ Hooray for literate people! Content-wise, it was a good read, even though sadism scares me! XD Raditz was, I thought, slightly OOC (But this could be because I haven't seen enough VxR fics around on the net). I've always been a fan of Vegeta x Raditz ^___^ I just might have to take a look-see at this art everyone's raving about... *bookmarks and dashes off* ~_^ |
Reviewed By: a little dominion like? On: April 13, 2003 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
anyways... its good! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 22:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
*squeaks*
FANTASTIC!!! I CAN'T BELEIVE YOU WEREN'T GOING TO WRITE AT ALL!!! *bows*
ooooooh... love it love it love it!! I wish I were more coherent right now, but you kinda destroyed that ^_^
*purrs loudly*
more soon? please? |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fantastic artist that is also a kick-ass writer! Excuse me while I turn a darker shade of green, ok?
Kind of rough in spots - Vegeta, that is. But oh my, you write about as graphically as you draw, and I was immediately drawn to this fic. I had to see where this relationship was going.
At times, I was jealous of Radditz. Other times, I was jealous of Vegeta. Usually, though, I just wanted to be there with both of them! :)
We do need to figure out why some of us can't see your pictures on MM, though. :( |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 05:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geez louise, I'd barely caught my breath from the first three installments, then I see the next two!!
Chapter three was SO powerful! I swear you wrote with such intensity that I felt like I had a tail, because I could feel Raditzu's pain! ACK! I want to know what it was that Vegeta carved into him...was it the royal seal, or his own name, or maybe just Pooky Bear?
Chapter 4 was excellent as well, I'm glad to know that Vegeta DOES care, even if he has a difficult time showing it. Again, I'll be looking forward to more! |
Reviewed By: likeacat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing, intense read. I tend to be a G/V fan - but your R/V pairing gave me pause.... and Radditz's hair - ~purr~ - so many possibilities. I've seen your artwork on saiyajin_secrets, but for some reason can't view it here - *sigh*. I hope you do more DBZ writing. |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, my entire body is Jell-O right now! Is this REALLY the first DBZ fic you've written? It's breathtaking!
Your writing style is magnificent; descriptive and visual. Your characterization of Raditzu is so indepth; his struggle between responding to his body's insistent cries, the adoration that his heart holds for Vegeta (although he doesn't wish to acknowlege it), and his determination to please him at all costs is just illustrated so beautifully! I'm simply blown away, and will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter! Beautiful job all the way around! |
Reviewed By: GoldFusion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's not enough that you draw stunning Raditz/Vegeta fanart. Now your writing too! Bless you child. Such a nice surprise to come home to after a bitch day at work. Now if I could only see the pics attached to the story...
More soon please ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 16:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
"There had better be more where that came from..."
Oh Man! So Cool...Great Lemon...
You would think since Vegeta had nearly driven himself mad for want of Radditz...he might be a little gentler...I mean what's he going do when Radditz body has had enough and he loses consciences? Of course he is half mad and he does think Radditz was with someone else...
We know that Radditz adores Vegeta and would do anything for him, obviously! Hahahaha!!! But, what about Vegeta? Is Radditz more to him then just a good f#ck?
Vegeta and Goku/Kakarott pairings are my fav...but this one kicks ass!!!!!
Waiting............................................................................................................................................... |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 08:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
yowza... O.o .... oh please please PLEASE tell me there's more to come!! heh... i made a funny.. ^_^
Great job!! ooooh Vegeta's such a sexy lil' fucker... *mumbles incoherently to herself*
More please? :D
(i'm so glad you decided to start writing! you're very good!) |
Reviewed By: Jady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you portray Raditzu's character, and I always will. His submissiveness to Vejita always astounds me! Amazing fic! Beautiful job! |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 18:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
More! More!
I don't know what happened to the review I left yesterday...but it's not here.
Anyway! Great work...hope to read more soon
Waiting............................................................................................... |
