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| "Love Is..." Reviews/Comments [ 135 ] | | Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 ] | Reviewed By: Miko On: April 11, 2003 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"blue" Your story is great so far and i really injoyed it.There's only one problem....U LEFT ONE HELL OF A CLIFFHANGER!!!!I was wondering what the letter said and is kagome and inuyasha going out or is it that kagoome is just crushing on him?Anyways your story was awsome and i can't wait till the next chapter,and yes you are a bitch and a big one at that! | Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I really like this fiction!!! =D Not bad at all!!
The downsides are that the spelling isn't the greatest. Or rather, the use of words. Such as when you say "Your on in ten minutes", it should be "You're". I onno, that's nothing big, it's just a peeve I have I suppose...it's odd, don't mind me! ^^;;
I also think that while Kagome was singing the song, you could've put written up more things during it so it wasn't just the song and make it less boring (not that it was really boring...that is, well...you know where I'm getting at! ^^;; ), like about what exactly people were doing, what she was thinking at the moment...
I know from your summary that Inu-Yasha apparently is in love with Kikyou...and yet, you say that Kagome thinks Inu-Yasha as "the love of her life". Does this mean that they're dating as of now, or she just is madly in love with him? The emotions are one-sided? Perhaps you meant to not include all this information in yet and you'll tell us later, but I was just wondering if you were gonna answer those questions in later chapters or something.
Anywayz, I'm not really into Kagome and Sesshoumaru, but I decided that your story sounded interesting so I'd give it a go. Please continue writing it AS SOON AS POSSIBLE, ya got it?!?! O_o;; *twitches*
Until then, Ja Matta Ne!!!
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: Yes, you ARE a bitch for making your first chapter a cliffhanger... ^_^ Just thought you'd like to know XD (lol) | Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 11:42 CDT
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I loved the scene with Yura in chapter eleven *grins* Your fic has put a bunch of questions in my head (all which will be answered eventually, I'm sure!). I hope Kouga isn't up to something bad...it better be a nice secret he's keeping! Actually, it would be interesting either way (^_^) And I really really want to know what Kira did to Inuyasha *laughs* | Reviewed By: bEcca On: April 11, 2003 17:55 CDT
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oOo nice.... well update SOON!!!! laterZ~! | | Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 ] |
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