| "Rainfall" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Kagome_1021 On: May 16, 2003 20:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with (hi)she/he has a good idea of getting u some reveiw a summary would help I almost missed ur story please do those thimgs they will help!!!! GOOD IDEA FOR A STORY |
Reviewed By: hi On: May 16, 2003 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story but make the chap. longer and put a summary to catch peaple attentions, make the chapters longer, and mybe put some lemon since alot of peaple like that so u would get more R&R. Other then that its good good idea please con't and maybe used my comment to get u some reveiws i hope that would help |
Reviewed By: Kagome_1021 On: May 21, 2003 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story but put some lemon in the story when u do u will get so many reveiw trust me all authors with lemon in thier story will get alot more reveiws, Alot of authoer said before they put lemon in thier stories they got little reveiw but when they put lemon in thier stories they got so many reveiw so please try |
