Reviewed By: Shella-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 08:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is pretty good! I like the way you portrayed Relena's feelings for Heero, in that she knows it's a kind of obsession but can't (or won't) stop feeling what she's feeling. I thought it was an interesting way of looking at it -- I admit, I've read little of 1xR & much less that I like, but this was good. The tone is well used & manipulated, using the tense & dialogue well to get your points across & describe everything well. I may be a bit of a sadist for liking the little bit where she scratched him, but then again, I think I'm not the only one. Good stuff. Well written.
Cheers,
--Shella-chan |
