| "Roommates" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: i_luv_anime [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u said u were gonna continue! WHAT HAPPENED!!!!
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Reviewed By: marcy On: July 23, 2004 22:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
me again umm can you please update as soon as posible i really want to read the next chapter so can you update soon pretty please.
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Reviewed By: marcy On: June 23, 2004 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story plz update soon and keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Kari_018 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story but my other self dosent she likes action but she'll just have to deal with it I've only read a few storys that have sakura and li as roomates and your the only one that mentioned looking for wallpapers.
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Reviewed By: Ekimozo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 04:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Update!!! Devoted Fans Want More!!! That was soo cute, that whole room deco thing!!! I just love this damn button!!! |
Reviewed By: lilazngurl On: July 18, 2003 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaha thats funny..............hahaha |
Reviewed By: Dragonia On: July 18, 2003 15:20 CDT
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Hmmm... what to say? Well okay how bout this. i love the idea with them rooming, but a question. What about the elders, his mother, and sisters too, where are they? what about Sakura's brother and father??? im trying to give you ideas. Hope you write more soon!! |
Reviewed By: kaye-kay On: May 11, 2003 16:01 CDT
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hey i told u to update! i'm bored an' i need a new chp. in this story or i'm gonna die! ok. so if u dun wanna be responsible for sumone's death over u stubborness to NOt update then u WIll put up tha next chp. an' u WILL update more often. got tat. good. |
Reviewed By: Kaye-Kay On: April 27, 2003 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz udate soon, because i like this story. itz so kute an' i think tha plot is so devious. lol. i like tha way they're both a bit reluctant at first. get to tha good parts k? |
Reviewed By: DokuRyu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a good start, but this is a total cleche as far as character basis. People really like this stuff, but it turns out better when you have one of the characters has perhaps somthing in his/her past that they can't forget, like say Sakura had a deep emotional scar from her mothers death. Other than that this is most likely going to be a great fic. I havn't seen this setting, but the simple Sakura-Li romance is way overused. I didn't notice any real errors in your writing, which is simply amazing. I wish I could get my stupid tense right, that's my problem though. I can't wait to see more, perhaps you should have somthing come between them that they have to overcome though. I'm not totally criticizing you, this is just how people tend to write these stories. He loves her, She love him, no problem, nothing comes between, they just get together, then the story drags on with just a bunch of nothing, no character devolopment, nothin'. |
Reviewed By: Lady Hawk On: April 13, 2003 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this fic so far. You hae to update soon. Do you have this on fanfiction.net?? You should you would get more readers. |
