| "Frivolous Lovers" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: kaoru17 On: July 31, 2004 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great piece of writing you've got here. Your writing style and grammar is exquisite and delight to witness. You've captured Sanzo's character to a tee. Just enough bastardly-ness and deeply masked insecurity to deal with his internal conflicts of Goku. Although some might see his indifference in the whole relationship as OOC, I find it quite appropriate for a jaded monk of his disposition. The smooth flow of your plot and sub-plot weaved with the creatively expressed angst really makes this story enjoyable to read. You are quite a talented writer. Am looking forward to the next installment soon. thanks
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Reviewed By: hey mama On: March 23, 2004 08:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sanzo's so bitchy, the way he mocks everything in this story n seemingly making light of goku's feelings...a very complex story...i'll need to go over some parts again... i'm not really sure bout sanzo n gojyo's conversation in chapter 5...i have my suspicions bout sanzo though...hmm...anyway, i'm waiting 4 your next chapter! don't keep us in suspense!
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Title: fic
Reviewed By: Abelle [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 02:47 CST
Comment/Review:
saiyuki_gal: Indeed, the characterization of Sanzo seems a little off, but for Sanzo to be in a sexual relationship with Goku taking in the account of Sanzo's... well... traits, which was something that the anime/manga didn't have, it all relies on my imagination and how well I know the guy really. ^_^ If Sanzo was in that kind of a relationship with Goku, I really doubt he'd be acting usually. But that's just me. As for the answer to why he had that relationship with Goku, hmm, it's in the next chapter. ^_^
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Reviewed By: mitch_loved On: February 15, 2004 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was wondering why Sanzo acted so… well… BASTARDLY… till I caught Gojyo and his conversation. It was subtle, but IT'S THERE!! I barely caught it, but that conversation…!!!! Is Sanzo saying what I think he's saying???!!
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Reviewed By: saiyuki_gal On: February 15, 2004 01:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved the writing style- you have an excellent vocabulary! However, as closed off as Sanzo can be sometimes, I don't see him being that apathetic towards Goku. *shrugs*
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Reviewed By: gallatica^^ On: October 08, 2003 05:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hhehe...couldnt help but read this one again...XD
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Reviewed By: Toki On: June 27, 2003 06:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVED this fic! I hope you continue it, I don't like being left in suspense. =( |
Reviewed By: zion On: June 12, 2003 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait to see the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: hiei`s koibito On: June 05, 2003 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
magnifico, that's all i can say |
Reviewed By: gallatica [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 05:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
^___________^
eheheh.......i never expected the NC-17 version to be like this....loved it, tho the 39 freak in me couldnt help but with it was, well, 39. ^^
but i guess it'll be thoroughly satisfied, in the later chapters? ^_^
*gives chocolate |
Reviewed By: kitsune_oni On: May 24, 2003 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really like you're writing style and the way you let the characters thoughts explain how they feel and whats happening etc... so glad i got to read the NC-17 version!! ^_^ And why does Goku has the "luck" to come at the wrong time and find out things that ruin his life... poor Goku... *sniff sniff* But really, you've made me see a colder side to Sanzo that I should experiment with sometimes... I've always made him out to be nice, but I realize that he doesn't necessarily have to be like that.
You have to continue as soon as possible!! |
Reviewed By: battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 11:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
yah!! i haven't read a saiyuki fic for months! i hope you update soon.
i would like the link to please |
Reviewed By: Kamui No Miko On: April 14, 2003 04:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sigh..it's a nice fanfic..it really is. But I just can't help feeling that fanfictioners tend to exagerate Sanzo's coldness wayyy too much. He aint that heartless though he is rather bitter sometimes.
Still, I really enjoyed reading these two chapters and I hope you'll provide the link for the third chapter soon. |
Reviewed By: gallatica [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 10:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
^_^
dunno whether u read reviews anymore....but i just wanna say that.....
ur fic is awesome!
the whole sanzo watching goku thing~
hehehhe.....
n i like ur OC's.....XD
erm.....
so......
can i have the link too?
XD |
