| "The true sesshoumaru and naraku" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: ange34 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 15:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! THIS FREAKEN SUX!!!! the last prson was right u do need to go back to school!! this is pathethic! you write like a 2nd grader!! here are some tips--- write full sentences, use words like said followed by the perons name, yah know what? just write a freaken story!!!! not some chat log or summtin, ha even a chat log is better that this cuz it actually has their names next to what they said!!!!!!
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Title: The True Sesshomaru and Naraku
Reviewed By: Edge [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 15:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
What was that?! I think you need to spend more time in school. The story is too hard to follow and the chapters are so short you can read them in 10 seconds. I don't recommend this story to anyone.
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Reviewed By: Damy On: October 12, 2003 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD THIS STORY REALLY SUCKS Really, you should just give up girl
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Reviewed By: AzureDragoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 21:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
*ponders*
Well, I like it... but a suggestion:
Put the fic in paragraphs to make it easier to read, and maybe something so you know if someone is speaking...
-Laters! |
