| "Empty Spaces" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 10:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow, that was one hot lemon if I ever read one, apart that it seems kinda unlikely that they look at eachother think "mmh, I'm in love" and fuck eachother right away, but wow what a lemon. You should read this with the song "silver rain fell" makes it even better, lol
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Reviewed By: Rachel Dracon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 11:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a spectacular Bakura/Ryou fic, not overdone in any way, which is rare. And the song you picked could not have been more perfect, in my opinion. Great job.
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Youko Ceri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good, it does not suck like you said. This is way better than my first lemon. Great job and wrie more like this soon, onegai! |
