| "Lemony Segments" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: RavenX On: February 08, 2005 07:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fic is so hot!! are you going to write more chapters? oh, please do! i really like your fic..
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Reviewed By: soe On: May 25, 2004 02:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG gorgeous! write more XD
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Reviewed By: LOVER-OF-HIEI [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wohwoh! Wonderful! Wonderful, wonderful! I just got into Touya and Yukito, and I had remembered your name when I was planning to read your YuYuHakusho fanfiction, and I remembered something about you writing Touya and Yukito, so I came back to check your writing out ^.^ WONDERFUL! WRITE MORE KUDASAI! (even if its not this particular story, keep writing Touya / Yukito!) Bye-Chu! ********Otaku~Hoshi
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Reviewed By: Ruby Red On: November 19, 2003 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I love this! ya gotta write more now! plz?!?!?! buh vye now!
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Reviewed By: Seteshi Janisu Eruton On: July 18, 2003 03:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Im hungry...
maki..
Red Tea..
*blinks*
Ki-chan 'cream!
To-ya kun~~~~'cream!
*Genki*
Waii!
The starting all the way to the spilt Ice cream is one of the sweetest fluff ever!
You want it rough?
Im 'fraid you blend it all up to perfect sweet and rough fic which is the nicest ever!
First time i say bunny wunny is the seme.
*drools*
*keyboard zapps*
eep.. o.O
P.s.
I am NOT sucking up on you. Its the truth.'Matter of fact,Im sucking on a lemon drop.. (Influenced by Professor Dumbledore. ^^) Want one?
Hee.. |
Reviewed By: Seteshi Janisu Eruton On: July 18, 2003 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*pokes* YOU SHOULD HAVE TOLD ME YOU HAVE ANOTHER TxY Lime UP!! *Rants*
I AM not underage. Not anymore. ^____^
*cuddlies*
Youre not mad at me? please dont.. I admit.. I was um.. obnoxious that day? *shifty eyes*
I am mean! Im sorry! And I'm not your sister anymore?! *subdued* Oh okay... Guess im too easy in jumping into conclusions and acusses people irrationally..;_;.. |
Reviewed By: JM On: June 25, 2003 13:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was a good story. please continue if u want to |
Reviewed By: Kati-anya On: June 06, 2003 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good.Best i've ever read. |
