Reviewed By: layla-xd [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2010 05:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh, that was so, so amazing! I´ve read some of your Weiss Kreuz fanfictions so I knew that you were good at writing Yaoi, but this story just blew my mind. It´s nothing epic, it´s not novel-like, but it was so emotionally intense and honest and just beautiful. That´s a scene every woman understands, at least if she ever had such a friendship as described between Darrel and Fen. I loved how you built up the tension between them from just talking about Darrel´s future romance (and fuck did I imagine Aya in a suit, such a hot picture!) to being really turned on and finally seriously caressing and sleeping with each other. so amazingly well written, seriously! And thanks for letting Fen and Fred marry each other because everything else would just not be realistic (at least in my opinion). In the end this story left me with a feeling of content and yet a hint of sadness... and did I mention how absolutely beautiful you wrote it? ^.~
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