| "When It Hurts The Most" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nette JP On: April 12, 2005 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that you said you were going to update!! I got to know what happens!! hurry and write more i can't wait!!
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Title: paniwi.
Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 14:47 CST
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hey, I know your still hanging around on mm.org cuz you reviewed my fics today so you'd better to updat cause I love this story
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Reviewed By: darkanimefreak54 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 23:26 CST
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and tommorow would be? You do realize it's 2005. Febuary, and that I will be extremely pissed if you don't update. ^__^
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Reviewed By: Kat1132 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 21:46 CST
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How did you update on Oct 19, when the tenth chapter still isn't up? Can you please remember to update this. I can't read minds, although I wish I could, so I have NO FRICKEN CLUE WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN! Please please PLEASE update! I want to know how this ends!
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Reviewed By: Mileniua [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 17:10 CST
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I read the fic for the contest and it is very good. I hope you get the last chapter done soon! ^___^
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Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (not logged in) On: October 24, 2004 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, I didn't mean to say year in the last review when I told you to update. ^_^;; But still do update soon. k? See ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (not logged in) On: October 24, 2004 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa, that was soo close! This is an excellent story. I really how you build the suspense up so gradually. You have so got to write more, you said you were going to update tomorrow, and that was like a year ago. So you have GOT TO UPDATE SOON!!! I want to read more! So please write more. See ya. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 17:55 CDT
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oO;; Disturbing stuff, but I still like it sorta. At least u don't have a rape scene yet like in Hato's work. But still, now I'm paranoid about pedophiles... >.>
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Reviewed By: Kuramaandhiei4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 12:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good!!! There's not a chapter after the 9th one though, and it says you were going to update tomorrow *frowns* maybe I'll check on AFF. Keep writing! I only found your fics because of Bishojo_Shadow. You're both wonderful angst writers!!!
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Reviewed By: Technical Dragon On: January 19, 2004 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleaze Update!!!
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Reviewed By: Yami Kitusne! On: November 12, 2003 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! It's me again! I am BACK TO TORTURE YOU WITH MANY MANY REVIEWS UNTIL YOU UPDATED THIS FIC!!!! MAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! YamiKitsune: Don't mind my hikari...-_-' she has had to much sugar...again... Kitsune: I HAVE NOT!!! I JUST WANT TO READ MORE OF THIS REALLY GOOD FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I WANT MORE RYOU TORTURE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WAIII!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UP DATE REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OR YOU WILL GET ANOTHER REVIEW FROM ME IN A COUPLE OF DAYS! EVEN LONGER THEN THIS ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^-^ JA NE! *looks around and whiseres* update soon! *YamiKitsune grabs her hikari and drags her off*
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Reviewed By: al On: October 02, 2003 20:34 CDT
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noooooooooooooooooooo. why do i get the feeling that this will never be updated?
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Reviewed By: My Own Shukuun [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 19:54 CDT
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DUDE!!! Tomorrow was like, two MONTHS AGO!!
Kiara: Why didn't you finish it... I want some Kura/Ryou fluff.
Orion: *throwing up* Grandpa...? *hurls*
I feel a little sick to, but it's a good story, please keep it up.
Jack: And I don't know if 'Hato' knows tomorrow is two months later also... ^^ |
Reviewed By: mai kujaku's clone [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT'S BEEN NEARLY A YEAR! WHEN IS THERE MORE!???? |
Reviewed By: KaibaGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 14:33 CDT
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Heh heh...the review right above this is from...dun dun dun...one of my 2 best friends!! Heh heh hey Marissa!!! Anyways, you must update now!! I love this story sooo much!! BTW, if you guys want this story updated, you should probably email authoress-lady...that's how I got .entanglement. updated...I will too! Let's email her unitl she gets so tired of it that she HAS to write more!!! (I'm praying for a Ryou/Bakura lemon) |
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