| "When It Hurts The Most" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: mai kujaku's clone [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, when are you gonna write more? it's been so long! oh PLS write more! |
Reviewed By: mai_kujaku's clone On: July 09, 2003 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEN ARE YOU GONNA WRITE MORE? I AM BEGGING YOU! I WANT TO READ MORE! IT'S BEEN SO LONG SINCE YOU WROTE IT! |
Reviewed By: Alisa On: July 08, 2003 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a Awesome fanfic. its kinda wierd but really good.
Keep Writing!! |
Reviewed By: mai_kujaku's clone On: July 06, 2003 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when are you getting more chappie's? i've waited for a long time for new ones! |
Reviewed By: The Draven Cats On: June 29, 2003 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope Bakura comes in on his Grandfather. I would love to read about what would happen to him.
Poor Ryou. This is a very good story. I hope you put up another chapter real soon! |
Reviewed By: mai_kujaku On: June 28, 2003 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE OR EXPERIANCE DYING!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 08:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
*whining* Mally-chan!! I want MORE!!! *puppy dog eyes* Soon? Onegai?
~KK =^.^= |
Reviewed By: KaibaGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 15:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
GRRR!! Why do you do this to me!!!! *pout* You always take soooooo looooong to update! ANOTHER CHAPTER WILL BE UP NOW! No that is not a request!!! I require more of this excellent story or my brain shall dry up and shrivel into a shapless lump of pudding!! Please, please, PLEASE add another chapter! |
Reviewed By: Elle-FaTe2x1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 21:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pleaseeeeee pleaseeeee updaet again soon!!!! I'll IM you e-mail and anything else if you don't!!! I wanna know what's going to happen to Ryou!!! So please update soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: jac On: June 17, 2003 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLS! PLS WRITE MORE! I REALLY LIKE THIS FIC! IT IS GREAT! PLS WRITE MORE! |
Reviewed By: Catsy On: June 14, 2003 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so good, even though the subject... *sniffs* I feel so bad for Ryou... *hugs Ryou and comforts him* that it made me cry my eyes out( which I usually don't do)hopefully Bakura does beat the shit out of "Grandfather William" or "I'll" do it, *grabs bat and beats the shit out of Grandfather William, drops bat and beats the old bastard up* plz, oh god plz, write some more! the suspense is killing me, and if you don't I think I'll go insane and go on a killing spree, starting with all the bastards in this world... PLZ WRITE SOME MORE!!!! PLZ I'M BEGGING YOU *kneels down and begs* PWETTY PLZ, WRITE SOME MORE,AND SOON......... |
Reviewed By: ashley On: June 14, 2003 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im begg-writting! please continue this story its sooo good!the suspence is killing me i have to know what will happen when bakura opens the door!!
[aahmmmm!*clears throat] on a more professional level i have to say your writing is superb and the story is well written ...keep up the good work!:] |
Reviewed By: Saikono [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 09:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually the rating is more like 9.5 but whatever.
I had a weird dream once where I was a half wolf half kid and people were stalking me. They tied my family up in the basement and when I called home someone named Winnie answered the phone. I didn't think much of it at the time when I woke up. But when I told my mom, she told me that there was a person named Winnie in our family.
Weird, huh? |
Reviewed By: Saikono [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 09:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, that's so disturbing. But it shows the reality that some kids have to go through. Keep writing and expose the truth of the tortures that plague smaller children with abusive relatives. |
Reviewed By: Shade Azuna On: June 10, 2003 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope you continue this soon! I'm enjoying this so much! I can't wait to see what happens!
~Shade~ |
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